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A colour of mine
I wish I knew a colour
that is wholly mine
that none could share
for its mine alone
but alas, no colour untaken
so let me choose blue
blue for the sky I see
Blue for the vast sea
blue for the snow-capped mountains
in my dreams I stand
a chosen heaven for me
if only I can really be there
blue for my heart beat
just missing a piece
a jigsaw puzzle unfinished
in this lonely existence.
*this poem was entered in a competition. thank you for reading*
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Re. A colour of mine
9th Mar 2016 9:56am
Re. A colour of mine
9th Mar 2016 11:43am
Sweet imagery! Perhaps in Heaven there is a shade of blue set aside for you...
I'm picking red, 'cos I love redheads... lol
Do I need another reason?
JJ
I'm picking red, 'cos I love redheads... lol
Do I need another reason?
JJ
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Re: Re. A colour of mine
9th Mar 2016 12:03pm
Re. A colour of mine
9th Mar 2016 1:35pm
I hear it echoing off the mountaintop, Grace.
Good write. Thanks for sharing.
Good write. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. A colour of mine
10th Mar 2016 00:11am
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10th Mar 2016 00:12am
Re. A colour of mine
9th Mar 2016 6:39pm
This is soft, a tad sad, yet dreamy too. Sure when you least expect it
Love will come knockin. N when they find u, they're gonna thank heaven for someone like u :)
Love will come knockin. N when they find u, they're gonna thank heaven for someone like u :)
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10th Mar 2016 00:13am
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Re. A colour of mine
10th Mar 2016 5:53pm
very lovely Grace, with tinges of sadness and optimism, colors my chakras, nice...
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10th Mar 2016 9:08pm