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Oubliette
todays blood congeals
over scabs of yesterday
tomorrow
I shall repeat it all over
leaving skin upon brick walls
till nothing remains
but bones
the only sign
I wos ever here
over scabs of yesterday
tomorrow
I shall repeat it all over
leaving skin upon brick walls
till nothing remains
but bones
the only sign
I wos ever here
Published 5th Mar 2016
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5th Mar 2016 9:27am
wow!.....so much said with so few words....maybe your best ink yet,...is my personal favorite :)
5th Mar 2016 9:38am
LOL a lot have said they prefer me poems when the end is a lot nearer the begining....they trying to tell me somthing !? :)
5th Mar 2016 9:48am
no...but i have written many a poem just as short and to the point....like to leave something up to the readers mind
5th Mar 2016 12:24pm
Hello mine friend; dig this write, have always liked this one, so little an so heavy... You have a very rich description here, very well done... How are ya doin today thus far...
5th Mar 2016 1:52pm
Back then they had torture down to a perfect science. Great ending, love this write.
6th Mar 2016 2:32pm
the mark of a good poet is the ability to say much, to speak lines of power using just a few words - this one does just that - love it :-)
9th Mar 2016 6:47pm
