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Vacancies
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So as I was saying
Johnny in my ear
deciding humanity sucks
You bucking this trend
you being you on my mind
otherwise its pretty vacant
So as I was saying
Johnny in my ear
deciding humanity sucks
You bucking this trend
you being you on my mind
otherwise its pretty vacant
Published 3rd Mar 2016
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5th Mar 2016 2:31pm
5th Mar 2016 3:51pm
There's one good one for everyone
Just gotta be getting lucky that they
Breathing at the time as you and that lucky enough to find each other
Tall order in most cases
Just gotta be getting lucky that they
Breathing at the time as you and that lucky enough to find each other
Tall order in most cases
5th Mar 2016 7:14pm
"Johnny in my ear" made my eyeballs spin. Great compression. These few lines are packed with image scenarios about states of mind, like a stick of dynamite before the fuse is lit. Way cool.
5th Mar 2016 7:32pm
