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Sketchy
I want to draw you
but I can only see
you with my eyes
yet you escape my mind
and sadly that will never
be enough for me.
but I can only see
you with my eyes
yet you escape my mind
and sadly that will never
be enough for me.
Published 28th Feb 2016
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28th Feb 2016 3:23pm
For a proper drawing you need to capture the essence of the soul (So says my artist friend) Food for thought here Nikki.
28th Feb 2016 3:59pm
28th Feb 2016 3:35pm
Being a fellow artist I know how this feels so I connect with this poem on a personal level
28th Feb 2016 4:32pm
welcome back, pretty A-rab
ahh, good for you, don't take anything less than enough.
it reads very well. not 100% sold on the first comma, mostly cos there's a natural pause at the end of the line anyway. that said, it's no major hindrance either way
keep shining
ahh, good for you, don't take anything less than enough.
it reads very well. not 100% sold on the first comma, mostly cos there's a natural pause at the end of the line anyway. that said, it's no major hindrance either way
keep shining
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28th Feb 2016 9:48pm
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28th Feb 2016 10:36pm
29th Feb 2016 6:48am
It gets blurry, pretty visuals. Stirs us up for sure, but if that fades in a hurry? Fuck it, a moment of blessed aesthetic sight was all that occurred. Blocat's got the right idea... If there isn't substance to compel, let them take a selfie.
Thanks for illuminating this one Nikki Cynic.
Thanks for illuminating this one Nikki Cynic.
29th Feb 2016 4:31pm
