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KASHMIR कश्मीर
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Do you think that I will show you
before you turn away, an infidel
with steely-eyed intent, while time
stands still, to make you feel
there's never been anything till this,
before rising to a Kashmir morning,
quick'ning pace of the double tabla,
twin hearts beating wildly as one.
A delicate touch of teeth, white and
even, scraping and biting down.
Down comes the veil of perfumed hair,
swaying velvet, like beaded curtains
separating the morphine of what you
know, of an opium den filled with
addiction, that numbs you till you're
unable to move, and on this night,
I give you the drug of my mouth,
intent on injecting with cobra's tongue
The overdose: to atrophy your fingers
and toes, echoing the notes of your
calling, from the seventh level of
consciousness, when it answers, when it
comes time, with narrowing bow through
your slip, when it comes time, with
hot milk spurting, from nostrils over-
flowing satisfied lips, splitting the
gush of residue, streaking under
chin and neck, with rivulets streaming,
like the river Ganges to the sea,
when the rush of your flood meanders
and mixes with salty cross currents;
bodies bathe in your Goddess's offering.
©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
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Do you think that I will show you
before you turn away, an infidel
with steely-eyed intent, while time
stands still, to make you feel
there's never been anything till this,
before rising to a Kashmir morning,
quick'ning pace of the double tabla,
twin hearts beating wildly as one.
A delicate touch of teeth, white and
even, scraping and biting down.
Down comes the veil of perfumed hair,
swaying velvet, like beaded curtains
separating the morphine of what you
know, of an opium den filled with
addiction, that numbs you till you're
unable to move, and on this night,
I give you the drug of my mouth,
intent on injecting with cobra's tongue
The overdose: to atrophy your fingers
and toes, echoing the notes of your
calling, from the seventh level of
consciousness, when it answers, when it
comes time, with narrowing bow through
your slip, when it comes time, with
hot milk spurting, from nostrils over-
flowing satisfied lips, splitting the
gush of residue, streaking under
chin and neck, with rivulets streaming,
like the river Ganges to the sea,
when the rush of your flood meanders
and mixes with salty cross currents;
bodies bathe in your Goddess's offering.
©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
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Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 23rd Feb 2016
| Edited 26th Feb 2016
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Re. KASHMIR कश्मीर
23rd Feb 2016 7:44am
sensuous is the poetry that you show us,
w/the touch of persuasive hands & a cobra's kiss...
w/the touch of persuasive hands & a cobra's kiss...
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23rd Feb 2016 10:07pm
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23rd Feb 2016 11:18am
A very beautiful and sensual read.
The act of lovemaking takes us places and you were a lovely guide.
Keith
The act of lovemaking takes us places and you were a lovely guide.
Keith
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23rd Feb 2016 9:58pm
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2016 8:42pm
Wow depth awesome whole
Things
Things
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23rd Feb 2016 9:56pm
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23rd Feb 2016 11:19pm
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24th Feb 2016 00:07am
It does? Sorry, I've never known any of his songs, I couldn't even hum a tune by him to save my life.
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24th Feb 2016 2:14am
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Well, since I didn't see a link anywhere, I went to youtube and searched for that song by Prince. Anything I found through youtube was awful. So just for now, I can't connect any of that with my poem. Sorry.
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24th Feb 2016 3:23pm
I didn't mention that song to make a connection to your poem; I suggested that song because the kids I teach like it. The song matched to the poem is "Pink Cashmere"
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Re: Re. KASHMIR कश्मीर
26th Feb 2016 3:17am
Ah, cashmere: the soft, fuzzy garment like the one I had in high school that I loved, and practically lived in. Kashmir is a valley in India. :)
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26th Feb 2016 6:58am
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Re. KASHMIR कश्मीर
Beautifully written. I hear the lute and sitar...and the dance of love. Good read, Jade.
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24th Feb 2016 9:37am
Thank you, Grace, for sharing such thoughts with me...
And yes, I've been told that music can of'n times be heard in a reader's mind from what I write as a lyrical poet.
And yes, I've been told that music can of'n times be heard in a reader's mind from what I write as a lyrical poet.
Re. KASHMIR कश्मीर
26th Feb 2016 00:48am
gush of residue, streaking under
chin and neck, with rivulets streaming,
like the river Ganges to the sea,
when the rush of your flood meanders
and mixes with salty cross currents;
bodies bathe in your Goddess's offering.
This is still an amazing ending...
I love the flow...
geoff
chin and neck, with rivulets streaming,
like the river Ganges to the sea,
when the rush of your flood meanders
and mixes with salty cross currents;
bodies bathe in your Goddess's offering.
This is still an amazing ending...
I love the flow...
geoff
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Re: Re. KASHMIR कश्मीर
26th Feb 2016 9:08am
Thank you, Geoff. I very much appreciate the fact of your consideration of my word craft, to any degree.
Re. KASHMIR कश्मीर
26th Feb 2016 2:37am
"A delicate touch of teeth, white and
even, scraping and biting down.
Down comes the veil of perfumed hair,
swaying velvet, like beaded curtains".... Fantastic imagery... a cool oddity with similarity is I created a character named Kashmere (an eighteenth century female)a long time ago, so your title grabbed my attention. I was delighted to find such delectable poetry! So glad I found my way here tonight! Much enjoyed it, --blue angel
even, scraping and biting down.
Down comes the veil of perfumed hair,
swaying velvet, like beaded curtains".... Fantastic imagery... a cool oddity with similarity is I created a character named Kashmere (an eighteenth century female)a long time ago, so your title grabbed my attention. I was delighted to find such delectable poetry! So glad I found my way here tonight! Much enjoyed it, --blue angel
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Thank you so much, blue angel. I am indeed honored. I'm intrigued about the character you created long ago; did you pursue the story as a series?
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You're very welcome...ah, I did one flash, spin off from it but no I didn't pursue her dark romance any further yet. It may do me some good to revisit my Kashmere. Your Kashmir being a city in India is very awesome! Much enjoyed this.
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Thank you, sweetheart. And this is a small blurb excerpt from Wikipedia:
"Kashmir (Kashmiri: كشهير kaśhīr, Urdu, Shina: کشمیرHindi: kaśmīr, कश्मीर, ) is a geographical region in the north of the India . Throughout the course of the history the geographical extent of kingdom of Kashmir kept changing, however by the mid-19th century, the term Kashmir geographically denoted only the valley between the Great Himalayas and the Pir Panjal mountain range."
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"Kashmir (Kashmiri: كشهير kaśhīr, Urdu, Shina: کشمیرHindi: kaśmīr, कश्मीर, ) is a geographical region in the north of the India . Throughout the course of the history the geographical extent of kingdom of Kashmir kept changing, however by the mid-19th century, the term Kashmir geographically denoted only the valley between the Great Himalayas and the Pir Panjal mountain range."
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2nd Mar 2016 7:38am
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2016 1:38am
An infidel indeed. If this is what it means to be an infidel then count me in Jade! ;-)
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16th Jun 2016 5:39am