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Fire
I want you in me
Deep
Let me feel you
All of you
I want to put
my mouth all over
You
Your cock
That rock
Let me suck the tip
Cover it with silk
Warmed by me
Not let you free
Stroke you
Mold you
Molten
Wet
Mmm...
Not yet
I want you all over me
Please baptize my need
In your white fire
Inside and out...
Published 22nd Feb 2016
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22nd Feb 2016 6:09am
22nd Feb 2016 6:21am
Blazing words burning the silence with the sound of your voice... very hot Savaja!!!
JJ
JJ
22nd Feb 2016 6:50am
Huck Finn ...at your cervix.....or is it Fuck Him...at your service.....I got white wash right here in my paint gun.....this is so hot i had to put on SPF 1000....
22nd Feb 2016 9:55am
Wwwooowww eee momma!! That was fiya!! lol damn... Can't imagine NOT enjoyin that kinda givin lol
22nd Feb 2016 12:53pm
22nd Feb 2016 2:14pm
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22nd Feb 2016 5:35pm
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22nd Feb 2016 6:57pm
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2016 8:01pm
Umm, uhhh, touché. Touchy too. But you knew that, didn't you? ;-)
23rd Feb 2016 1:53am
This set off a fire in my mind and body which consumes me in hunger. You are a gifted poet of the myriad genres.
John
John
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2016 8:56am
ok lady...there you go again
"Let me suck the tip
Cover it with silk
Warmed by me
Not let you free
Stroke you
Mold you
Molten
Wet
Mmm...
Not yet "
not yet..ha!
too late...
mental orgasm
released...
"Let me suck the tip
Cover it with silk
Warmed by me
Not let you free
Stroke you
Mold you
Molten
Wet
Mmm...
Not yet "
not yet..ha!
too late...
mental orgasm
released...
23rd Feb 2016 5:28pm
"I want to put
my mouth all over
You
Your cock
That rock
Let me suck the tip
Cover it with silk "<--- that even turned me on, because 'blowjoys' are my favorite thang' ;)
my mouth all over
You
Your cock
That rock
Let me suck the tip
Cover it with silk "<--- that even turned me on, because 'blowjoys' are my favorite thang' ;)
25th Feb 2016 10:52am
savaja, darling mine,
i find myself stirred
... un'done & wound up indeed ...
[must perhaps not read you twixt teaching classes
lest i molest the barre for succor
oh sweet ache]
i find myself stirred
... un'done & wound up indeed ...
[must perhaps not read you twixt teaching classes
lest i molest the barre for succor
oh sweet ache]
26th Feb 2016 10:22am
Very well written superbly read and that's hard to do with this kind of poetry. Great piece Savaja.
23rd Mar 2016 00:05am
