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shake
I shudder groan and my rush..
feels like expelling lust demons drunk off love...
My deep thrust into him...
Letting out my roar..
I pour my seed...
He needs it and so do I
to lift our ache
With cock quake in vehemence...
as i go down and catch on my tongue
every drop of his sacred semen...
I kiss his mouth
... giving him off my tongue...
He sucks me
.....giving him off my prick...
And he walks away...
satisfied with himself..
I stay... laying hands crossed behind head...
Satisfied.
feels like expelling lust demons drunk off love...
My deep thrust into him...
Letting out my roar..
I pour my seed...
He needs it and so do I
to lift our ache
With cock quake in vehemence...
as i go down and catch on my tongue
every drop of his sacred semen...
I kiss his mouth
... giving him off my tongue...
He sucks me
.....giving him off my prick...
And he walks away...
satisfied with himself..
I stay... laying hands crossed behind head...
Satisfied.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 20th Feb 2016
| Edited 22nd Feb 2016
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Re. shake
20th Feb 2016 9:40pm
Beautiful my baby. Erotic opium of the most intoxicating kind. I love where this took me. ;)
Love ya in depth and perfectly,
John
Love ya in depth and perfectly,
John
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Re: Re. shake
20th Feb 2016 9:51pm
I melt you call me baby...i love you...thank you my love..for taking me as me...and giving me all that you are...
jen
jen
Re. shake
21st Feb 2016 00:37am
Letting out my roar..
I pour my seed...
He needs it and so do I
to lift our ache
With cock quake in vehemence...
as i go down and catch on my tongue
every drop of his sacred semen...
Ahhh Damn Calamity, you've given me
quakes, shakes and yearnings in my
stomach... (that's an accomplishment
when through the vehicle of words... not
spoken in presence of, but read from
somewhere out there) and movement in
the dimension of my extension.
I could only vaguely imagine what the effects
of hearing You seductively utter words like
these in presence would cause a man to feel.
Outstanding descriptiveness scripted here... Dantalion
I pour my seed...
He needs it and so do I
to lift our ache
With cock quake in vehemence...
as i go down and catch on my tongue
every drop of his sacred semen...
Ahhh Damn Calamity, you've given me
quakes, shakes and yearnings in my
stomach... (that's an accomplishment
when through the vehicle of words... not
spoken in presence of, but read from
somewhere out there) and movement in
the dimension of my extension.
I could only vaguely imagine what the effects
of hearing You seductively utter words like
these in presence would cause a man to feel.
Outstanding descriptiveness scripted here... Dantalion
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Re: Re. shake
Thsnk you my darlin Pan...was written in the masculine...
adore you dig your mind and comments!
love
j
adore you dig your mind and comments!
love
j
Re. shake
21st Feb 2016 2:55am
explodes like a pressure cooker.
you went someplace entirely different w/this.
it sticks & it stains...
you went someplace entirely different w/this.
it sticks & it stains...
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Re: Re. shake
21st Feb 2016 3:08am
Thanks John...have wrote my last couple in the masculine...a wonderful comment...
love
j
love
j
Re. shake
21st Feb 2016 2:11pm
Role playing huh?i can imagine
you really giving to the object
of your devious desires! lol
Hot stuff lady :)
you really giving to the object
of your devious desires! lol
Hot stuff lady :)
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Re: Re. shake
22nd Feb 2016 00:26am
Lol...yup! This time i was a make in a homosexual affair...fun fun fun!! lol
love you doll!
jen
love you doll!
jen
Re. shake
Re: Re. shake
23rd Feb 2016 7:44pm
awe Thanks Walt...you have inspired me so much of late....true erotica poet...you understand its nuance...I loved working with you...
love
jen
love
jen
Re. shake
23rd Feb 2016 7:24pm
Now that was erotica at it's best Jen. I loved this piece it stirred my loins ;-)
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Re: Re. shake
23rd Feb 2016 7:42pm
Hmmm..and you sure know erotica at it's best. Thank you bloat..i appreciate the comment.
respectfully
jen
respectfully
jen