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40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
I used to care about getting laid
would work on it, like I was being paid
would shave my face, wash my hair
cleaned the place
carried condoms everywhere
I played the game like a Playboy star
didn't need the red sports car
went for a drink, or dinner date
if they could think
I'd be up till really late
Now out of the blue, I couldn't care
don't even bother to buy new wear
some who can vote or recall the past
pop a note
hoping I still can last
But truly now, I couldn't care
wouldn't bother, even if it were a dare
They all have tits and show their nips
Truly now, I couldn't care
even with their tattoos on hips
When the room was candle lit
the bath rose-pettled, and my were arms fit
I'd buy some toys for a special drawer
and read them poetry,
Just like, a man whore
I used to care about getting laid
I played the game like a Playboy star
now out of the blue, I couldn't care
But truly now, I couldn't care
When the room was candle lit
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Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
11th Feb 2016 2:20pm
But life begins at 40! Actually you've hit a very powerful note here about the lack of substance baseless sex for the sake of sex has. You begin to realize as you truly mature (I'm talking inside not out) that there's something more to it all, so the frivolous games cease to appeal. Only the real thing can awaken that kind of dormancy. Great ink. Al. The best is yet to be.
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Re: Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
13th Feb 2016 8:33am
Absolutely you know, suddenly sex with no substance is not much fun at all. Indeed a drag. Yes I definately see more toit, and yes the games do not apeal, though must admit I just gave in last night again, like some strange addiction where you doit, even though you don't care to, and no longer really enjoy it. kinda wierd hey? Thanks Ahvati ;)
Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
11th Feb 2016 6:09pm
it was the other way round for me,
everybody else lost interest,
as far as I was concerned..!
everybody else lost interest,
as far as I was concerned..!
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Re: Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
13th Feb 2016 8:30am
shit that's interesting, well perhaps searchin some other places might yield a result of some who do care?
Thanks for the visit a comment Paul
Al ;)
Thanks for the visit a comment Paul
Al ;)
Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
11th Feb 2016 6:50pm
Nice one Al I found when I stopped caring they started chasing me. In fact the less effort I made the more I got laid!
Enjoyed the read and enjoy being over 40 you'll find it exhilarating being a laid back dude! (Shit I'm 74 tomorrow and still think of sex 10 times a day) :-)
Enjoyed the read and enjoy being over 40 you'll find it exhilarating being a laid back dude! (Shit I'm 74 tomorrow and still think of sex 10 times a day) :-)
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Re: Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
13th Feb 2016 8:28am
Oh Mr. Cat
I love your comments they are always original and so free.
I'm waiting to test this theory of yours regarding qnty vrs care... intersesting scientific experiment.
Al ;)
I love your comments they are always original and so free.
I'm waiting to test this theory of yours regarding qnty vrs care... intersesting scientific experiment.
Al ;)
Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
It's a blessing indeed when those blessed automatic erections aren't a bother anymore. Gave it up 12 years back after a nasty experience and tried again 2 years back - I'm cured now! (at least for 20 this time, with luck)
Such a relief to feel the last few drops of interest dribble away.
Such a relief to feel the last few drops of interest dribble away.
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Re: Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
13th Feb 2016 8:27am
Fuuurk... you know you are right, hadn't thunk like that yet myself, but you are...
Just a relief really!
how awesome
Thanks
Just a relief really!
how awesome
Thanks
Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
Gosh Al,
I read this once-thru while murmuring the lines to myself, becoming totally emersed to the end - so natural & real does it sound. Reality-checked ink, sir.👍
==Jade🌾
I read this once-thru while murmuring the lines to myself, becoming totally emersed to the end - so natural & real does it sound. Reality-checked ink, sir.👍
==Jade🌾
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Re: Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
13th Feb 2016 8:25am
Hey Jade,
-x-x-x-
Thank you for the kindness of your visit and comments, you are so kind. I am grateful.
It is natural and real... I'd s'pose ;)
-x-x- Al -x-x-
-x-x-x-
Thank you for the kindness of your visit and comments, you are so kind. I am grateful.
It is natural and real... I'd s'pose ;)
-x-x- Al -x-x-
Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
14th Feb 2016 7:47am
I came out of a coffee place the other day. I couldn't hide it. My girlfriend asked what that hell hapened. You are so happy. I said to her. You know what I STILL GO IT. I thought I lost I'm that thing that make us a man. Like we are dogs man we are. We just stop playing around when we are in a relation.
Your poem was so real. Only is man. Know all the trucks and game we have to play. Amen.
Your poem was so real. Only is man. Know all the trucks and game we have to play. Amen.
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Re: Re. 40 Plus [No Longer Casanova]
16th Feb 2016 2:20pm
Wow... what a a story to relate... thanks you
It's great having you here, and awesome reading your comment.
Thank You
It's great having you here, and awesome reading your comment.
Thank You