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Treat
My mouth
waters
in anticipation of...
Give me cherry popsicles
Biting cold
Luscious slush
Sliding down my throat
I want to put
cherry-stained lips
mine
Around
Surround
Pin you down
Mmm...
Frigid
Rigid
Turgid
Now, calescent
As I swirl my tongue
Caress
Worship
(Ooo...I'm wet, drenched
Torrential rains
salty need - as with you)
Let me suck
this
confection you present
I shan't relent
Icy sweet
Cherry treat
Chased by
Calescent heat
Salty sweet
Give me
lots of
Cream to eat
Published 30th Jan 2016
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30th Jan 2016 1:05am
Omgoodness!!! Yea, ur 'treat' would be a pleasure to TREAT u to, n that pleasure would produce MUCH to cream about lol
30th Jan 2016 8:48pm
Mmm...Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
It makes me very, very happy to know twould bring you pleasure to provide such a treat.
Ahhh, an abundance of cream, indeed - don't taunt now, luv. You know how I need... ;-*
It makes me very, very happy to know twould bring you pleasure to provide such a treat.
Ahhh, an abundance of cream, indeed - don't taunt now, luv. You know how I need... ;-*
30th Jan 2016 1:07am
What a delicious treat you've penned here. This was fun, sensually on fire, and luscious to read. Truly this man will provide ample cream. I know this as a man. ;-)
John
John
30th Jan 2016 9:07pm
Goldenmyst, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much. To find that this appealed to your senses so viscerally is a delight altogether, luv. ;-*
You tempt me to discover what other entirely delectable manly information you might provide a woman were she to prove...Hmmm...inquisitive... ;-D
Thank you very much. To find that this appealed to your senses so viscerally is a delight altogether, luv. ;-*
You tempt me to discover what other entirely delectable manly information you might provide a woman were she to prove...Hmmm...inquisitive... ;-D
30th Jan 2016 1:52am
To watch your lady lick and enjoy a Popsicle is a sensual thing. The anticipation of that being reenacted
is enough to have one standing ready. Loved this fun and sensual write. Easily visualized as all your writes are.
Keith
is enough to have one standing ready. Loved this fun and sensual write. Easily visualized as all your writes are.
Keith
30th Jan 2016 3:57am
30th Jan 2016 11:38am
Sounds like you want your just desserts serve with sugar on top... pretty pleeeeease...
jj
jj
30th Jan 2016 12:59pm
savaja, i do believe i need to go take a stiff drink... straight from the hose
temptress
xo
temptress
xo
30th Jan 2016 6:07pm
Blowjob:101, with a sexy-ass instructor, any man with a weak heart need not sign up for this class….
She’s beautifully dangerous folks…. ;)
She’s beautifully dangerous folks…. ;)
Anonymous
30th Jan 2016 11:07pm
Ah, Miss Savaja, if I wasn't such a heterosexual, I'd give you more than cream, more than slushes. . .more than anything;). . .*brilliant*. . .~xo, Devlin.
Anonymous
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31st Jan 2016 10:34am
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1st Feb 2016 11:20pm
A perfect description of an upcoming event for me tomorrow... ;-)
Loved it...
Loved it...
3rd Feb 2016 2:42pm
17th Feb 2016 1:20pm
damn you make me hunger....sounds like the perfect entree for a erotic restaurant....loved this ..SS
30th Mar 2016 5:05pm
Oh Savage, I adore the way you play with verse, tantalizing treat indeed! 😉
