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Unbreak my Heart...
I think, I think...
As time trudges forth eyes
focus' down, face lookin' north
scopin' for a sign...she used to
occupy the gutted space in mine,
a glutton for her, I'd forever pine...
Cold dead stare, scarcely barin'
the tears the eyes cries missin' her,
I should no longer care...
I drink, I drink, to not think...
Yesterday used to be
so very wonderous to me
Yesterday has gone away
the stars still stay...
though, no longer twinkle my way
I think, I drink, I think,
n' the drink does nothin'
to erase, the tears, the pain...
I drink, sufferin' in thoughts
I think...
As time trudges forth eyes
focus' down, face lookin' north
scopin' for a sign...she used to
occupy the gutted space in mine,
a glutton for her, I'd forever pine...
Cold dead stare, scarcely barin'
the tears the eyes cries missin' her,
I should no longer care...
I drink, I drink, to not think...
Yesterday used to be
so very wonderous to me
Yesterday has gone away
the stars still stay...
though, no longer twinkle my way
I think, I drink, I think,
n' the drink does nothin'
to erase, the tears, the pain...
I drink, sufferin' in thoughts
I think...
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Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 1:10am
Soooo sad :( cheer up Poe! And drinking doesn't do anything. I think it intensifies the emotions if anything. But yet we continue to drink anyways. Hope you find what your lookin for
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 2:17am
Cheer up? Yea. thanks for the kind words, n the pen support, appreciate it much :)
Re. Unbreak my Heart...
Anonymous
30th Jan 2016 1:16am
Hey Poet..... This is a dramatic write......I so felt this brilliant emotional ink......so much I'm lost for words......luv and hugs to you my friend......xo :)
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 2:22am
Soooooo sweet u are flower, thank u so much, ur hugs are felt :)... Appreciate your support always n forever :)
Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 3:56am
And many times we should no longer care. The heart can be a most lonely prison. Felt this to the core of my being. Well written and beautifully expressed.
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 2:45pm
A lonely prison sounds just about right indeed my friend... Thank you, happy to hear from you again :)
Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 12:47pm
"she used to
occupy the gutted space in mine"
^^^^^
ohhhh yes, poe, that echoes somewhere my heart used to be...
... loved this
occupy the gutted space in mine"
^^^^^
ohhhh yes, poe, that echoes somewhere my heart used to be...
... loved this
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 11:47pm
Yea, there are times when I feel like WE all here have been frequent visitors of the lonely/broken hearts club... Thank u my sweetheart, gratefully n always appreciate your support :)
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30th Jan 2016 4:08pm
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30th Jan 2016 11:45pm
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30th Jan 2016 4:47pm
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31st Jan 2016 12:58pm
Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th Jan 2016 6:29pm
So weird that I was listening to this about three days ago ---> https://youtu.be/szBcy80iO3E
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“Yesterday used to be
so very wonderous to me
Yesterday has gone away
the stars still stay...
though, no longer twinkle my way” <---- dang, that stanza hurts! I know this pain like I know my body, very well!
Beautiful melancholy read, Poe!
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“Yesterday used to be
so very wonderous to me
Yesterday has gone away
the stars still stay...
though, no longer twinkle my way” <---- dang, that stanza hurts! I know this pain like I know my body, very well!
Beautiful melancholy read, Poe!
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
31st Jan 2016 1:02pm
Aaaahhh yea, Toni Braxton's song
when I first heard it yrs.ago truly moved my heart. Ty for the refresher... N ur sweet commentary sweet Tara, deeply grateful for you n your support :)
when I first heard it yrs.ago truly moved my heart. Ty for the refresher... N ur sweet commentary sweet Tara, deeply grateful for you n your support :)
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Anonymous
31st Jan 2016 00:51am
..she used to
occupy the gutted space in mine,
a glutton for her,...
heavy heavy vibe ...damn
occupy the gutted space in mine,
a glutton for her,...
heavy heavy vibe ...damn
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
31st Jan 2016 2:01pm
Thanks bro. Good to hear from you again, n as always I'm grateful for all of your continued support.
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
31st Jan 2016 2:04pm
I'm truly sorry you can relate to this kinda pain, but I'm equally aware that
more seem to know it than not... Thank you my dear, truly appreciate ur kindness n support
more seem to know it than not... Thank you my dear, truly appreciate ur kindness n support
Re. Unbreak my Heart...
31st Jan 2016 10:40pm
excellent heartfelt scribe Poetik filled with raw emotions!! Piercing Ink ..i really enjoyed!!
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
1st Feb 2016 00:20am
Aaawww u lil sweetie pie, thank you
for your sweet praise n your unyielding support :)
for your sweet praise n your unyielding support :)
Re. Unbreak my Heart...
1st Feb 2016 11:23pm
Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
2nd Feb 2016 1:04am
Nah I don't think there is...
As always, I appreciate your thoughts n support sweetheart :)
As always, I appreciate your thoughts n support sweetheart :)
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Anonymous
18th Feb 2016 2:23am
A drink should be shared.
Here, you slice through my
meat hitting bones as they
shatter.
My heart misses and
suffocates with your words.
Evoking one.
Here, you slice through my
meat hitting bones as they
shatter.
My heart misses and
suffocates with your words.
Evoking one.
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
18th Feb 2016 3:12am
Omg... I fucking loved this comment! Lol truly a poem in itself n thank you for both the thoughts n time :)
Re. Unbreak my Heart...
29th May 2016 9:43pm
A well crafted write. It had a definite meter that had me rapping it out and finished off with a well thought 'think' :-)
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Re: Re. Unbreak my Heart...
30th May 2016 00:25am
You know what's funny about what you said?
"Had a definite meter" be cuz I honestly. Pay no attention to how I. Writing, I just do it with usually some kinda internal beat I feel in my heart... lol but Yea, generally I like to rhyme but not always, thank you, I truly appreciate your time n thoughts on my ink. :)
"Had a definite meter" be cuz I honestly. Pay no attention to how I. Writing, I just do it with usually some kinda internal beat I feel in my heart... lol but Yea, generally I like to rhyme but not always, thank you, I truly appreciate your time n thoughts on my ink. :)