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'What Mind's Visions View...'

Forgive me for slackin'
lackin' , in my mind's capacity...

For the instance it relayed
when I very first layed eyes
'pon such a beauty's audacity...

I admit it freely, I'd  a loss of verbiage...
the  'nervous mess'
had gotten the best of me
you see...

n' I foolishly referred to you
as a perfect ten...

yet when given a little moment,
to truly  view  your beauty n'
comprehend...

it was quite clear you are far
more than a simple ten...

you are an unequivocal fact,
a rare, n' priceless Gem!
Written by Poetikmind (_---_)
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