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Faded colors on a white canvas shows vacancy
Emptiness forming slowly
Darkness hovering over the vulnerable
Dazed images running on replay over and over again
Wanting to run forward but only stepping back
D e p r e s s i o n
Emptiness forming slowly
Darkness hovering over the vulnerable
Dazed images running on replay over and over again
Wanting to run forward but only stepping back
D e p r e s s i o n
Published 19th Jan 2016
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19th Jan 2016 9:12pm
You know what I think of this
Fave line " Emptiness forming slowly"
It had an impact on me. Peace
Fave line " Emptiness forming slowly"
It had an impact on me. Peace
20th Jan 2016 2:54am
20th Jan 2016 6:29am
gotta push hard to move forward,
it takes a lot of heart.
mournful piece...
it takes a lot of heart.
mournful piece...
20th Jan 2016 6:41am
20th Jan 2016 6:41am
20th Jan 2016 7:55pm
21st Jan 2016 3:47am
20th Jan 2016 10:12pm
21st Jan 2016 3:48am
Thank you that's very nice of you to say :)
I'm glad I started writing on here as well :)
I'm glad I started writing on here as well :)
