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Short Release
I lay back
Hair spilt 'round in grass..
Cock swings hard out my grasp
Him on hard tit suckling sweet
Tender bites in summer heat
He fondles mound forces
White thighs spread
Mouth kisses ever down between
Long legs
Fingers make gap between pussy lips
Licks like kitten sucking dewey drip
Butterfly flit skilled tongue
Pants his hot breathe
Back arches up mid moan
Thighs hold on like death
Desperate grind into his groan
Heat rise and swell
In clitoral zone
I beg him enter to release my flood
And cum undone with one deep thrust
Hair spilt 'round in grass..
Cock swings hard out my grasp
Him on hard tit suckling sweet
Tender bites in summer heat
He fondles mound forces
White thighs spread
Mouth kisses ever down between
Long legs
Fingers make gap between pussy lips
Licks like kitten sucking dewey drip
Butterfly flit skilled tongue
Pants his hot breathe
Back arches up mid moan
Thighs hold on like death
Desperate grind into his groan
Heat rise and swell
In clitoral zone
I beg him enter to release my flood
And cum undone with one deep thrust
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 15th Jan 2016
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Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 5:20pm
You make intercourse rapturous my love. This is passionate, beautiful, and oh so erotic. I love how you write the erotic. You've created a vision of sexual bliss.which takes me in deep. Truly fine work my lover woman. ;-)
Love you deeply and your poetic escapades,
John
Love you deeply and your poetic escapades,
John
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Re: Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 5:57pm
Thank you truely my beautiful slave..
It's easy when you have such wonderful inspiration..
Love you just as deep John..
All of my heart
Jen
It's easy when you have such wonderful inspiration..
Love you just as deep John..
All of my heart
Jen
Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 5:36pm
Hmmnn.. a but of female premature ejaculation eh? Where's your self control Jen? Loved it baby for your erotic skills
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Re: Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 5:59pm
Lol ..kitty Cat...can hold when necessary..like fine wine, let it breath and ready to cum uncorked..lol
Thank you baby..
Love ya
Jen
Thank you baby..
Love ya
Jen
Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 6:03pm
Really fun erotic Jen! Excellent wordplay ("desperate grind into his groan") and climax. The release may be short but the joy is lasting.
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Re: Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 7:50pm
Hey my sweet T...! Thank you babydoll.
Just buzzin in..gimme a call this week dollface..love you!
All my heart
Jen
Just buzzin in..gimme a call this week dollface..love you!
All my heart
Jen
Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 6:54pm
Pretty good tongue work I'd say to have you there in one thrust but boy I bet it felt great!!! You lucky girl. Great stuff Jen.
With lots of love
John
With lots of love
John
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Re: Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 7:51pm
Lol.. Thank you John..been missin you!
Send me a note darlin..hope you are well..
Love you tight
Jen
Send me a note darlin..hope you are well..
Love you tight
Jen
Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 6:57pm
Great use of rhythm and percussive sounds to convey the urgency and the passion here. The sibilant "s's'" in the line "Him on hard tit sucking sweet" you can hear the sucking noises - what a great image that is. Eropoetic stuff, indeed!
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Re: Re. Short Release
15th Jan 2016 7:52pm
Thank you sweetheart, what a thoughtful, insightful comment..bring it on! Lol will be reading you soon doll..
Welcome!
Love
Jen
Welcome!
Love
Jen
Re. Short Release
16th Jan 2016 8:31pm
"Back arches up mid moan
Thighs hold on like death
Desperate grind into his groan"
Those are some suzzkin hot lines right there. Great work, Jen.
Thighs hold on like death
Desperate grind into his groan"
Those are some suzzkin hot lines right there. Great work, Jen.
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Re: Re. Short Release
17th Jan 2016 9:55am
Lol...suzzzkin..might have to use that!
Thanks you darlin you...
Much love Moe!
J
Thanks you darlin you...
Much love Moe!
J
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17th Jan 2016 2:48pm
Re: Re. Short Release
17th Jan 2016 2:53pm
Lol..i liked suzzkin...thought it was onomatopées... a sucky sound...ssszzzk!
Re. Short Release
18th Jan 2016 8:45pm
Talk about a linguistic hand job. No foreplay just give me what I need , smack me on the ass, and send me back to work. Short for sure, but definitely satisfying. I like
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