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Strangers with the Same Last Name
I've ran out of thing's to say
You can't stop screaming
We've been here before and
The only thing that's familiar is the fight
Breaking me down into dust
Just the way you like it
We're strangers with the same last name
I can't make the man you are
Be any other way
You can't make the woman I am
Be beautiful
Give my heart an escape
I'll give you loneliness
You can't stop screaming
We've been here before and
The only thing that's familiar is the fight
Breaking me down into dust
Just the way you like it
We're strangers with the same last name
I can't make the man you are
Be any other way
You can't make the woman I am
Be beautiful
Give my heart an escape
I'll give you loneliness
Published 14th Jan 2016
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14th Jan 2016 4:37pm
Those last two lines rung out like a bell. "Give my heart an escape/I'll give you loneliness". That is a sad place to be when those are the terms. Nice write, tommielynn.
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2016 8:44pm
Tommie Lynn,
Everyone deserves an escape clause. It is a sad road to travel, together, yet alone.
Great title!
tornado
Everyone deserves an escape clause. It is a sad road to travel, together, yet alone.
Great title!
tornado
14th Jan 2016 9:07pm
14th Jan 2016 10:05pm
"The only thing that's familiar is the fight "
That, then says it all, Tommie. Nothing left but the fight. My god, what we do to each other!?
That, then says it all, Tommie. Nothing left but the fight. My god, what we do to each other!?
14th Jan 2016 10:46pm
It's the push and the pull....love and hate....crazy love! Thanks standingmyground 😊
Anonymous
15th Jan 2016 5:58am
I knew a couple who renegotiated there marriage terms every five years, either one could opt out,they have not yet.
But wouldn't that be nice in these cases?
Trapped in each others misery sad.
But wouldn't that be nice in these cases?
Trapped in each others misery sad.
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