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Casanova
He was the light that showed me
only what he knew I should see,
the light that revealed back onto him
what I otherwise smelled in the dark
He was the light that warmed me, and
then went out, denying me that warmth.
The light that guided, leading me
forward, to where there was only pain.
He became all that I made of him,
blinding me, of knight taking rook.
If I had chosen a path more worn for
the ease it offered to those inclined.
Yet my trust, in spite of the scorn,
moved me to tears as he saw me reach,
taking his hand, using him as my sight,
remembering a photograph in reverse,
of what I felt and sensed, but could not see;
the casa to his nova, of a love perverse.
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Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 14th Jan 2016
| Edited 16th Sep 2020
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Re. Казанова
14th Jan 2016 9:40am
This is wonderful Jade ... I love the word play particularly "case to his nova".
All the best in the competition.
All the best in the competition.
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Re: Re. Казанова
Hi Lobo, thank you for coming by and giving me your thoughts, and wishes -- I hold you in high esteem for many reasons.
Actually, the competition closed hours ago, and to my absolute surprise, I had placed. I'm dead chuffed to have won, but still recovering all the same. Thanks so much for enjoying the piece: the title is Russian for "casanova", hence my wordplay of "casa/ nova" as you pointed out. :-)
Actually, the competition closed hours ago, and to my absolute surprise, I had placed. I'm dead chuffed to have won, but still recovering all the same. Thanks so much for enjoying the piece: the title is Russian for "casanova", hence my wordplay of "casa/ nova" as you pointed out. :-)
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Re: Re. Казанова
18th Jan 2016 6:05am
Aww thank you darling Taryn, what wonderful sentiments awaited me (being tardy in my reply!), with gratitude to you for the sharing...
With love🌹💋
Jadey
With love🌹💋
Jadey
Re. Казанова
14th Jan 2016 2:56pm
Re: Re. Казанова
18th Jan 2016 6:12am
Re. Казанова
15th Jan 2016 9:14pm
conveyed exquisitely, "blinding me, of knight taking rook. /the casa to his nova, of a love perverse." those lines are magnifique...
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Re: Re. Казанова
18th Jan 2016 6:09am
Merci Dean, your enjoyment of the wordplay of my verse is especially appreciated.🌾
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18th Jan 2016 6:14am
Re. Казанова
17th Jan 2016 6:58am
the light guides thru the dark
but when the light expires:
stranded in the heart of darkness -
classical entreaty...
but when the light expires:
stranded in the heart of darkness -
classical entreaty...
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Re: Re. Казанова
18th Jan 2016 6:19am
Re. Казанова💔
19th Jan 2016 7:45pm
Re: Re. Казановаԁ
19th Jan 2016 8:07pm
I'm honored by your recognition of this, and thank you for the share, whale.🌊🐋
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