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PARTYINTHEBASEMENT

She clutched that bottle as if it were her lifeline.
A sweet, naive girl passed out on the floor
worry in our eyes.
You slurred "it's okay i can take care if her just go, please just go"
while you struggle to keep yourself from unraveling like a loose string
"sweetie wake up.." you drop your bottle.
Head slumped against the bathroom door
we're on the outside, hearing this parade of tragedy
hoping neither of you falls asleep.
Written by julivonne
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