last lonely blues

This is so Beautiful JohnFeddeler ....

wrote me a song
wrote me a song to sing
when love is gone

"sigh"

tears actually ....

People become so ingrained in patterns it's difficult to believe anything else exists.

stars don’t shine on a sinless stage

There is typically a price for success, except for those rare performers drug into the spotlight.
Raw write full of like-minded fellowship who recognizes each other through the filter of their blues.

Feelin' the lyrical blues as it trails its way into the depths of an exquisite melancholy. These things get better with age,savoring this...ink.. Happy New Year, Sir Blues! ,,,blue angel,,,hugs - (cheers!!)

this is a winning entry mister feddeler, a wonderful tribute to a legend
xoxox

I’ll never forget the things I can’t remember

... That may be my next tat or tombstone marker

"strap my sleepy soul to the back 
of a harley, ride me where the music goes 
when there is nothing left to say 
& no one listens anyway"

So taking that trip in mind with you right now.  Very well written piece, John.  Encapsulates the epiphany I think we all come to at *that particular point in life.. waking up to nothing.

Michael

That gives hope and makes me keep lusting for things they're about to deny me within a few years.
Great piece, John!

ode de Lemmy hit my heart here, SirJ.. *righteous is your pen..

"stars don’t shine on a sinless stage"
~beautiful in its ache

you are epic as always, dear Sir..
shine on, ride on..

huggins to your sigh-inducing pen,
~d

'caught a train to the edge of trouble ' loved this line and the slam dunk laid down bare last verse kept me there...love what you do as always, you inspire the cobwebs in my brain to try remember how to sling sentences together, in hope that the result is somewhere near as classic as your work...CURTSY BOW

Love this John...it's speaks volumes  :)

(stars don’t shine on a sinless stage )!

My Feddler, my Feddler.. must
you inspire me? will thee grant
her a single wish?  

you know what she's asking of  
you..

JohnFeddeler

Indeed!! Last lonely Blues...such a relatable read. Great!!!

ahhh no words for how much i loved this... just applause *claps*

Oh my gosh, I love to sing the blues and this would make a lovley song with some mournful music :)

"Caught a train to the edge of trouble," one of several terrific lines in this sweet rock n roll number.  Well done , John !