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She Submits to On Fire
Candle light teases and flicks
As if were tongue licks
Dances off her curves
With sweet twists and sensual swerves
Flicker casts shadow shapes
Of vast imagined moon scapes
Making the Sea of Tranquility
A reality with orange and dark pools of burning femininity
Shades of red jump place
As she readily undulates
Her body and flame reflect pleasure
As candle's glimmer slows time in anticipation's agonising measure
Light teases her facial contortions
She glows with feline like distortion
Ecstasy is lit wild as her climax builds
That flame roars on her body as she yields in complete to his cocks will
As if were tongue licks
Dances off her curves
With sweet twists and sensual swerves
Flicker casts shadow shapes
Of vast imagined moon scapes
Making the Sea of Tranquility
A reality with orange and dark pools of burning femininity
Shades of red jump place
As she readily undulates
Her body and flame reflect pleasure
As candle's glimmer slows time in anticipation's agonising measure
Light teases her facial contortions
She glows with feline like distortion
Ecstasy is lit wild as her climax builds
That flame roars on her body as she yields in complete to his cocks will
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 31st Dec 2015
| Edited 1st Jan 2016
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Re. She Submits to On Fire
31st Dec 2015 8:38pm
Wow babe!!! this is beautiful!!!...in light and shadow loves flame burns for thee
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Re: Re. She Submits to On Fire
31st Dec 2015 9:03pm
Yes honey..
The T's throughout inTended..
My T is your sword and light.
All my love babywolf..
🍒🔫
Jen
The T's throughout inTended..
My T is your sword and light.
All my love babywolf..
🍒🔫
Jen
Re. She Submits to On Fire
31st Dec 2015 8:55pm
I agree, it's a sensual delight with a very hott yearning felt throughout :) mmmmm hell yea lol
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Re: Re. She Submits to On Fire
31st Dec 2015 9:04pm
Thank you mih sweet darlin Poe..
You are a pure treat in my eyes..
So good gettin to know you doll..
All my love
Jen
You are a pure treat in my eyes..
So good gettin to know you doll..
All my love
Jen
Re. She Submits to On Fire
Anonymous
1st Jan 2016 1:16am
Happy New Year Jen.....this is awesomely hot......can feel the heat of the flame.....enjoyed very much....xo :)
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1st Jan 2016 1:26am
Re. She Submits to On Fire
1st Jan 2016 1:35am
The twists and swerves of that candlelight leave everyone sweating in it's dancing light and heat. A wonderful piece Jen.
With love,
John
With love,
John
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1st Jan 2016 1:40am
Re. She Submits to On Fire
1st Jan 2016 2:17am
Burn baby burn!!! This built into a mighty bonfire and ended with a mighty solar flare. You rock my love.
Always your love,
John
Always your love,
John
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Re: Re. She Submits to On Fire
1st Jan 2016 11:09am
Oh john..whooops! There went my bra! Lol
Thank you my darlin man..
You know how deep i love your words and you..
What a divine gift bestowed to me this year . you.
Could not have asked for more..
All my deeep tight love
Jen
Thank you my darlin man..
You know how deep i love your words and you..
What a divine gift bestowed to me this year . you.
Could not have asked for more..
All my deeep tight love
Jen
Re. She Submits to On Fire
1st Jan 2016 8:33am
Re: Re. She Submits to On Fire
1st Jan 2016 11:12am
Well pat my ayyus and call me Goldilocks! Lol..
Seriously .thank you. A just right comment..i will be returning the favor..if i dont get to it..drop me a mssage and say..bitch please...lol
Is that your own wirk on your pro pic? If so.. Great doll..
Love
J
Seriously .thank you. A just right comment..i will be returning the favor..if i dont get to it..drop me a mssage and say..bitch please...lol
Is that your own wirk on your pro pic? If so.. Great doll..
Love
J
Re. She Submits to On Fire
1st Jan 2016 11:21am
ginnykins, there's some gorgeous imagery here *sighs*
ohhhh the visuals of dancing light on hollows, shading the lines, the rise & fall of breath...
"As if were tongue licks
Dances off her curves
With sweet twists and sensual swerves
Flicker casts shadow shapes
Of vast imagined moon scapes"
...
^^^^^^^
babydoll, you're lighting fires in my veins
yuuuup i'm in lust with this one, totally gives me girl wood
xoxox
ohhhh the visuals of dancing light on hollows, shading the lines, the rise & fall of breath...
"As if were tongue licks
Dances off her curves
With sweet twists and sensual swerves
Flicker casts shadow shapes
Of vast imagined moon scapes"
...
^^^^^^^
babydoll, you're lighting fires in my veins
yuuuup i'm in lust with this one, totally gives me girl wood
xoxox
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Re: Re. She Submits to On Fire
1st Jan 2016 11:33am
Lol...Awesome..there goes the cork on my new years bottle..girl wood "pop!"
Kitten..
So good to see you first thang 16..
You are just a top fav in my new bag o tricks i have met round heeeyah babygal..
Gosh i just love and adore you..
Hope your new year is so special doll..
Sincerely
Love
J
Kitten..
So good to see you first thang 16..
You are just a top fav in my new bag o tricks i have met round heeeyah babygal..
Gosh i just love and adore you..
Hope your new year is so special doll..
Sincerely
Love
J