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Pri Maddona
She prances round in poetic prowess
To lick you up and down your furrry flattery..
Prickly tongue catches pheromone
Elixer of her dominatrix pen
Use you as muse
A womanly position?
Not necessarily
Bonanza cherry loves a good whine
And dine of her own
She has enough femme moan to last a life time.....
But..
She wants to create..
And yearns to be re created..
Collects words about herself like platelets..
No nucleus without winter worship
Of Bonanza's words..
A vicious turbulent cycle of mind fuck
Eloooongated...
Ova n ova n ova n ova n ova n ova..
You get the picture........
She masturbates to the sound of her contrived name called out in cryptic (or not so cryptic) verse..
Perverse?
The better..
To lick you up and down your furrry flattery..
Prickly tongue catches pheromone
Elixer of her dominatrix pen
Use you as muse
A womanly position?
Not necessarily
Bonanza cherry loves a good whine
And dine of her own
She has enough femme moan to last a life time.....
But..
She wants to create..
And yearns to be re created..
Collects words about herself like platelets..
No nucleus without winter worship
Of Bonanza's words..
A vicious turbulent cycle of mind fuck
Eloooongated...
Ova n ova n ova n ova n ova n ova..
You get the picture........
She masturbates to the sound of her contrived name called out in cryptic (or not so cryptic) verse..
Perverse?
The better..
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 16th Dec 2015
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Re. Pri Maddona
16th Dec 2015 8:11pm
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16th Dec 2015 10:00pm
Re. Pri Maddona
16th Dec 2015 9:09pm
This reminds me a little of that song "You're So Vain" only this has an erotic kick to it that Carly Simon probably couldn't get away with. Your primadonna's vanity goes plenty further in how she gets off on her own name, a really nice touch. Great wordplay too with the perverse verse. And "a vicious turbulent cycle of mind fuck"? Could be my favorite line of the day! Fine work Jen. Just keep your primadonna away from the belladonna.
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Lmao!! Hey Crow!! Not tawlkin bout my pri maddona! Hehehe .belladonna..take it to calm my ass down.. thanks
Love it.
Love ya
Jen
Love it.
Love ya
Jen
Re. Pri Maddona
Anonymous
16th Dec 2015 10:54pm
Looks like you got it all together when you penned
this one, Jennifer. I especially loved this . . .
"Bonanza cherry loves a good whine
And dine of her own
She has enough femme moan to last a life time....."
Three dynamic stand alone lines . . .
this one, Jennifer. I especially loved this . . .
"Bonanza cherry loves a good whine
And dine of her own
She has enough femme moan to last a life time....."
Three dynamic stand alone lines . . .
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Re: Re. Pri Maddona
17th Dec 2015 00:31am
Re. Pri Maddona
17th Dec 2015 3:05am
Ahhh, calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
You have pulled an image from and referenced a movie that has to be one of my all-time favorites. ;-D I could (and have done so) watch it again and again.
You've caused me to desire rather deeply to view it once more.
Hmmm... yearn. ;-*
Masterfully written, luv.
You have pulled an image from and referenced a movie that has to be one of my all-time favorites. ;-D I could (and have done so) watch it again and again.
You've caused me to desire rather deeply to view it once more.
Hmmm... yearn. ;-*
Masterfully written, luv.
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Re: Re. Pri Maddona
17th Dec 2015 3:13am
Awe thanks..and i don't really know her name..mine..it's a mix between a Tom Robbins character..and my own imagination...
The fifth element, a good flick..but a great part this wailing diva..
Much luv Savaja
Jen
The fifth element, a good flick..but a great part this wailing diva..
Much luv Savaja
Jen
Re. Pri Maddona
17th Dec 2015 4:02pm
ginnykins, this could be reeeeeaaaaaal scathing if you didn't tag it as erotic o.O mind you, i can think of one person this applies to that just twists my nips the wrong way
yowza! loved this
xo
yowza! loved this
xo
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Re: Re. Pri Maddona
18th Dec 2015 4:52am
I wonder if we have the same dame in mind? Hmmmm..lol thank you doll.love you..will be getting to reads tomorrow.
Love you
J
Love you
J
Re. Pri Maddona
17th Dec 2015 7:11pm
"A vicious turbulent cycle of mind fuck
Eloooongated...
Ova n ova n ova n ova n ova n ova..
You get the picture........
She masturbates to the sound of her contrived name called out in cryptic (or not so cryptic) verse..
Perverse?
The better."
Dunno why this appealed to me the most but it really did. A real Willie wobbler of a phrase..
:-)
Eloooongated...
Ova n ova n ova n ova n ova n ova..
You get the picture........
She masturbates to the sound of her contrived name called out in cryptic (or not so cryptic) verse..
Perverse?
The better."
Dunno why this appealed to me the most but it really did. A real Willie wobbler of a phrase..
:-)
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18th Dec 2015 4:53am
Re. Pri Maddona
18th Dec 2015 1:41am
This is brilliant! I am in love with you and your playful verse. You took me in a trip into the feminine universe which sings to my heart. The archetypal woman is painted with strokes of rapture. Ova Ova Ova. LOL. I love what you do to me. ;-)
Love ya so much my nymph of Diana,
John
Love ya so much my nymph of Diana,
John
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Thank you baby man..
Love what you do to me...
And with all my deep soul
Jen
Love what you do to me...
And with all my deep soul
Jen