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damaged
I am damaged but not
dead,I protect myself
inside I let some in and
keep others out please take
your shoes off as you come in
dead,I protect myself
inside I let some in and
keep others out please take
your shoes off as you come in
Published 16th Dec 2015
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16th Dec 2015 3:14pm
Tread lightly on my heart, whether lover or friend. There's power here in brevity.
Do you really need 'myself' in the third line? It's a bit redundant and implied.
Do you really need 'myself' in the third line? It's a bit redundant and implied.
