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11th Dec 2015 7:32am
drifting upon the turbulent waters you've taken us to.
stunning poetry & a siren's song...
stunning poetry & a siren's song...
11th Dec 2015 1:05pm
wow. well done on this one. I love poems that incorporate nature. This was beautifully crafted as it focuses on the concrete images and lets the reader delve into the abstract. well done
Jade(y):
It may not sound like it, but I'm about to pay a very high compliment: rocked my soul with the same spirit and feel as Van Morrison's voice wailing through "Into the Mystic"
Geoff
It may not sound like it, but I'm about to pay a very high compliment: rocked my soul with the same spirit and feel as Van Morrison's voice wailing through "Into the Mystic"
Geoff
11th Dec 2015 7:58pm
Love the last line.
Was taken back to a romance had at the Cote dazur at 17.
And leaving him there...
Something in the water..i wrote oceanic themed..so did handcuffs..
The feeling of drowning..treading water..the restlessness was duely captured. A little hard to read with the script font white and background going on...a lot. But its pretty.
Very nice dove
Love
Jennifer
Was taken back to a romance had at the Cote dazur at 17.
And leaving him there...
Something in the water..i wrote oceanic themed..so did handcuffs..
The feeling of drowning..treading water..the restlessness was duely captured. A little hard to read with the script font white and background going on...a lot. But its pretty.
Very nice dove
Love
Jennifer
