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CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind and voiced by me at his behest
Hot passion wells, in an instant's spurt
N' he desires to make her fluids squirt, like silken sheets spread about in dreams...
Acting selfishly, a hungry mouth drinks juices profusely as it streams
Calmly lappin' he licks her where
her treasure's shone, like a doggy loving on his favorite bone...
Ecstasy will scream into the night
as a hot tonguin' gonna bring it home
Facial expressions expose
that most sacred of all in freeze frame, a curlin' of the toes, a glare,
a soul bout to be set aflame...
Ultimate heights of orgasmic bliss, achieved, forces the utterance of his name...
N' his heavy cock thumps with thickening jealousy,
wishing it was he that could
taste that sweet pussy...
As she's kickin' out, tender legs crawl invisibly- through air
then begin to choke-lock the head
of he...
His intense sucking, gives
good vibrations making the tender pink meat sing in gushin' sounds
See now he's never gonna wanna stop sipping on this sweet honey drink, as it drips from baby's mound...
Giving her, that full face fuck
that she's always needed,
wanted, n' feened for
to send her heaven bound...
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Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind and
7th Dec 2015 6:10am
Ultimate he888888 of wat ¡ and how awesome . The metaphor of a dog licklicking a bone .... ( a wholly ate up object of fatal sexology?.good piece
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
7th Dec 2015 12:09pm
Erotic Ninja is rather brilliant, isn't he, luv? :-* Thank you so much for your insightful and intriguing comment.
You've given me somewhat to ponder: "a wholly ate up piece of fatal sexology" - what a truly fascinating perspective you have, luv. ;-* (I certainly hope tisn't fatal, though, upon considered reflection, if it wouldn't be so damaging to one's partner, certainly, I'd rather go blissfully... ;-*)
I do adore it when I'm given cause to ruminate further and more deeply upon a piece, luv. Thank you for that. :-*
As I said at the start, Erotic Ninja is rather scintillatingly brilliant...
You've given me somewhat to ponder: "a wholly ate up piece of fatal sexology" - what a truly fascinating perspective you have, luv. ;-* (I certainly hope tisn't fatal, though, upon considered reflection, if it wouldn't be so damaging to one's partner, certainly, I'd rather go blissfully... ;-*)
I do adore it when I'm given cause to ruminate further and more deeply upon a piece, luv. Thank you for that. :-*
As I said at the start, Erotic Ninja is rather scintillatingly brilliant...
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
8th Dec 2015 10:05am
Yea fatal if he dies from the pleasure! lol thank you for your time n comment :)
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Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind and
7th Dec 2015 7:26am
savaja, lovely oracle, it's wonderful to hear you reading again [you have been missed & i would be remiss not saying so]
poe has outdone himself writing this one
brava
xo
poe has outdone himself writing this one
brava
xo
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
7th Dec 2015 12:23pm
Ahhh, lovely Snowcrystal, thank you for your immense kindness, luv. :-* I've missed you all terribly. Hopefully, I'm back now.
Life's vagaries, ne c'est pas? ;-p
As for the Erotic Ninja, indeed, he has rather outdone himself. I can tell you this: it took me some time to read this one. I had to, ahem, spend some time alone with it first... ;-D
Life's vagaries, ne c'est pas? ;-p
As for the Erotic Ninja, indeed, he has rather outdone himself. I can tell you this: it took me some time to read this one. I had to, ahem, spend some time alone with it first... ;-D
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
8th Dec 2015 10:07am
Aaaawwww...well you know Mami I gotta do what I can do to please you! lol. Thank you sweetheart :)
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Anonymous
7th Dec 2015 7:30am
well..since you put it like that!!!..lol..this collab went to another level of sensuality..Savaja..wow!!..PM...aka king of cunnilingus..again..wowww.
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
Naajir, luv ~ :-*
Thank you ever so much. Coming from you, luv, with your intensely fragrant and delectable eroticism that I can never get enough of, this is high praise indeed! ;-*
And, luv, I think you may well have hit upon another well-deserved moniker for the Erotic Ninja: King of Cunnilingus - now, would that I had the pleasure of experiencing his prowess in person... ;-D (I believe I could guarantee a whole other layer to that reading of mine should such ever occur! ;-p)
Thank you ever so much. Coming from you, luv, with your intensely fragrant and delectable eroticism that I can never get enough of, this is high praise indeed! ;-*
And, luv, I think you may well have hit upon another well-deserved moniker for the Erotic Ninja: King of Cunnilingus - now, would that I had the pleasure of experiencing his prowess in person... ;-D (I believe I could guarantee a whole other layer to that reading of mine should such ever occur! ;-p)
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
8th Dec 2015 10:09am
Lol I hear u bro. She DID put it like that huh!? lol n King? wow ur far too
kind but I truly appreciate it always bro. :)
kind but I truly appreciate it always bro. :)
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Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind and
Anonymous
7th Dec 2015 8:11am
well done you two!
intense :)
intense :)
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
7th Dec 2015 12:39pm
Thank you very much, mikimoondancer, luv. :-*
I am exceedingly glad you found this an intense experience and well done for it means our collaboration was a success and that is an excellent thing, luv. ;-D
Erotic Ninja provided material that is quite inspiring, ne c'est pas? ;-*
I am exceedingly glad you found this an intense experience and well done for it means our collaboration was a success and that is an excellent thing, luv. ;-D
Erotic Ninja provided material that is quite inspiring, ne c'est pas? ;-*
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
Anonymous
7th Dec 2015 6:33pm
Oui :)xx
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
8th Dec 2015 10:10am
Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind and
*heavy-lidded, descends as she dissolves... melting as she fades into husky tones from the milk of Savaja's cum-ly voice...*
Ohh fuckkk...
Ohh fuckkk...
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
7th Dec 2015 12:46pm
Ahhh, Jade-Pandora, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so very much. You are quite kind to me, you know. :-*
You DO know what you've written here is poetry, luv, and rather gloriously erotic at that... ;-*
What an incredibly delicious tribute, luv!
Thank you so very much. You are quite kind to me, you know. :-*
You DO know what you've written here is poetry, luv, and rather gloriously erotic at that... ;-*
What an incredibly delicious tribute, luv!
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
8th Dec 2015 10:14am
I agree with Savaja completely... Ur comment was an amazing lil spill of poetics! :) thank you for that n reading/listening to this ink :)
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Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind and
Oooohhhmmyyyggoodiegoodness!!! You have taken my ink
to an entirely NEW plateau n I'm not only honored
I need some time alone uhm to uhm... Ponder. Yea! That's it lmao. Thank u my precious one :)
to an entirely NEW plateau n I'm not only honored
I need some time alone uhm to uhm... Ponder. Yea! That's it lmao. Thank u my precious one :)
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
7th Dec 2015 11:55pm
Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
Would that you could do your pondering over my prone body. ;-* Though, I'll admit, I'm not very good at remaining still and prone. ;-p I'm much more likely to require...restraint, shall we say, in such a situation.
Mayhap...hmmm...
Tis I who am honored you presented me with this challenge, luv. Talk about breaking through barriers. I had to do so to voice this piece. I was initially blushingly reticent. Of course, you'd created such a frenzy, I could hardly speak. ;-*
Thank you, luv, for pushing me a bit.
Would that you could do your pondering over my prone body. ;-* Though, I'll admit, I'm not very good at remaining still and prone. ;-p I'm much more likely to require...restraint, shall we say, in such a situation.
Mayhap...hmmm...
Tis I who am honored you presented me with this challenge, luv. Talk about breaking through barriers. I had to do so to voice this piece. I was initially blushingly reticent. Of course, you'd created such a frenzy, I could hardly speak. ;-*
Thank you, luv, for pushing me a bit.
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
8th Dec 2015 00:56am
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
8th Dec 2015 2:27am
Ahhh, luv, your willingness to fill me with your warm regard is all I could ask. ;-*
Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind and
Re: This write...to ALL who bless this page, We thank you very very much :)
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2015 8:27pm
Well written and sensuously delivered.
Enjoyed this a lot , but of course
the combo of you two would deliver nothing less
Enjoyed this a lot , but of course
the combo of you two would deliver nothing less
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
9th Dec 2015 2:49am
Thank you very much, indeed, slowgasm, luv. :-*
It pleases me greatly that you enjoyed this so, mon chiot...
Hmmm...
Je voudrais que vous me plaire à bien des égards. ;-*
It pleases me greatly that you enjoyed this so, mon chiot...
Hmmm...
Je voudrais que vous me plaire à bien des égards. ;-*
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
10th Dec 2015 11:27pm
Thank you very much, I'm happy you liked n truly appreciate your feedback on our collab. :)
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10th Dec 2015 9:14pm
damn......can't ....seem.....to keep...my hands.....out of.........my pants!!!!......hot-hot-hot...his words and your voice together are AMAZING!!!
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Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
10th Dec 2015 9:32pm
Thank you very, very much, SatansSperm, luv. :-*
Hmmm...
Now, I have certain rather luscious images embedded in my mind, luv. I may have to do somewhat with my hands as well.
Thank you, again... ;-D
Hmmm...
Now, I have certain rather luscious images embedded in my mind, luv. I may have to do somewhat with my hands as well.
Thank you, again... ;-D
Re: Re. CUMM-IN-HIS... Written by the Erotic Ninja himself: Poetikmind
10th Dec 2015 11:30pm
Lmao... Can't stop laughing about how vividly you 'painted' your predicament dude... But of course
I'm flattered you felt 'moved' to action
by our collaborative effort lol... Thank you kindly :)
I'm flattered you felt 'moved' to action
by our collaborative effort lol... Thank you kindly :)
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2015 4:13am
Poet and Savaja.......yes yes......what hot ink voiced by a sexy voice.......brilliant write the two of you....enjoyed this very much......xo :)
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