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STOP THE MADNESS
Break the window
slit your wrist
nobody cares
about your little temper fits.
just stop the madness
blow it all away
with a bullet of sorrow
you live for today
and say fuck whatever happens tomorrow
but little did you know
that for you it wont come
only pain,misery,and sorrow.
Uhm this next piece is from 45 by shinedown but it describes how i feel,"Cuz im starin down the barrel of a 45,swimmin through the ashes of another life,no real reason left to say....." so yeah....fuck it
slit your wrist
nobody cares
about your little temper fits.
just stop the madness
blow it all away
with a bullet of sorrow
you live for today
and say fuck whatever happens tomorrow
but little did you know
that for you it wont come
only pain,misery,and sorrow.
Uhm this next piece is from 45 by shinedown but it describes how i feel,"Cuz im starin down the barrel of a 45,swimmin through the ashes of another life,no real reason left to say....." so yeah....fuck it
Published 21st Jun 2011
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21st Jun 2011 00:12am
21st Jun 2011 00:15am
not really but who gives a fuck anymore,i sure as hell dont. Yeah ive got talent,big deal. i wont live long enough to use it
21st Jun 2011 11:27am
if i can make it, you can make it.so if you kill urself im bringing you back to life and beating the shit out of you. i didn't go through 3 months of hell and pain and betrayal so i could watch a friend go through it too and not make it... just sayin.
21st Jun 2011 2:29pm
promise? cuz then i could like repeatedly kill myself :P Look dad you have shit to live for,you've got a loving girl back home. I've got a fucked up world to live in :/
21st Jun 2011 5:30pm
ur right. i do. but i also have the pressure of being 18 serving my country in a country that doesn't like me. i know what it's like being in a fucked up world. i'm 18 and still can't stand bugs because of shit in foster care. at least you can live freely in this country bro. it sucks right now... but if you just fight it, again and again, you'll get better. take it from me, and others. i know i've been in ur shoes... whether u believe it or not. and i know you can get through this, cause if you couldn't you'd be dead already.
21st Jun 2011 9:46pm
23rd Jun 2011 8:38pm
*sniffle* *sniffle* you make your father so proud son... im gonna buy you that unicorn that you always wanted! :D
23rd Jun 2011 8:42pm
well if im alive still. i cant make my real dad love me or be proud of me but maybe by being in the army like he was will.....i hope so
21st Jun 2011 7:20am
21st Jun 2011 7:25am
