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shadow bunny
shadow bunny stalks in night
shadow bunny causes fright
with his demonic might
he will send u on one-way flight
when he hunts he uses stealth
your not safe even with your wealth
hunt from the dark is his game
u cant escape cuz hes so great
he will bite u with his teeth
now u will start to bleed
he starts to tear u part from part
THE SCREAM OF PAIN IS OUT LOUD
pond of blood and few bones left
shadow bunny now is feed
human flesh is SO GOOD
shadow bunny now is full
shadow bunnys lifes at stake
morning sun is at stand
he only fears the cursed light
so he rans to his blight
now its time to get some rest
last victim took his best
when the moon rises up
shadow bunny will wake up
better have night-light there
cuz u never know what might stare
crimson eyes hide in dark
shadow bunnys camouflaged
u start to tremble in sweet fear
shadow bunny starts to leer
u then say:"Oh my dear."
shadow bunny starts to tear
shadow bunny causes fright
with his demonic might
he will send u on one-way flight
when he hunts he uses stealth
your not safe even with your wealth
hunt from the dark is his game
u cant escape cuz hes so great
he will bite u with his teeth
now u will start to bleed
he starts to tear u part from part
THE SCREAM OF PAIN IS OUT LOUD
pond of blood and few bones left
shadow bunny now is feed
human flesh is SO GOOD
shadow bunny now is full
shadow bunnys lifes at stake
morning sun is at stand
he only fears the cursed light
so he rans to his blight
now its time to get some rest
last victim took his best
when the moon rises up
shadow bunny will wake up
better have night-light there
cuz u never know what might stare
crimson eyes hide in dark
shadow bunnys camouflaged
u start to tremble in sweet fear
shadow bunny starts to leer
u then say:"Oh my dear."
shadow bunny starts to tear
Published 19th Jun 2011
| Edited 20th Jun 2011
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2011 2:01pm
Although, I hardly see this poem as being considered upbeat though. I feel it is more dark. Unless of course that by being put into the upbeat category you're making some sort of statement, in which case I feel it works as well. Just wondering is all! You've got talent, that's for sure! Keep it up! ;)
i wanted it to be funny..since i took a small white cudly cute animal..that doesn't eat meat..and imagined it as some bloody dark creature...but in happy mood
