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Toast to You
I'm in a deep move
swaying around the room
to the twinkle of lights
my holiday surprise
warm apples, cinnamon and pumpkin pie
dance of sugar plums
a celebration of seasons
with my ladies tonight.
A salute to the sisterhood
bruised blossoms renewed
remnants mended from tales
pulled by undertow beneath veils
in a sea of darkness groping for light
searching for honesty and truth
in a deceptive world
when all hope is gone.
Cooking la comida
para mis amigas
Life is short
for the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end.
Here's a toast to you all
now let's have a ball
swaying around the room
to the twinkle of lights
my holiday surprise
warm apples, cinnamon and pumpkin pie
dance of sugar plums
a celebration of seasons
with my ladies tonight.
A salute to the sisterhood
bruised blossoms renewed
remnants mended from tales
pulled by undertow beneath veils
in a sea of darkness groping for light
searching for honesty and truth
in a deceptive world
when all hope is gone.
Cooking la comida
para mis amigas
Life is short
for the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end.
Here's a toast to you all
now let's have a ball
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Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 2:31am
sounds like a party full of great company
& high times, & no room for the mundane...
& high times, & no room for the mundane...
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Re: Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 2:03pm
Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 6:00am
Life is about living in the moment, no time for pain. Celebrate 'you' now, by smiling every single day.
Toast to you beautiful lady! Cheers!
Enjoyed this ink Lena! Made me smile... Xo
Toast to you beautiful lady! Cheers!
Enjoyed this ink Lena! Made me smile... Xo
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Re: Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 2:15pm
Your words have made a huge difference to me mamacita.
In addition, I love this time where I get to decorate (I love decorating based on holiday season) my house and host ; )
Cheers mami!
In addition, I love this time where I get to decorate (I love decorating based on holiday season) my house and host ; )
Cheers mami!
Re: Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 2:18pm
Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 12:00pm
friends who tell you the truth, who listen, who share, who live in the moment and like to have a good time...what more could you ask for...oh yeah, someone lovely to hold you at night... :)
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Re: Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 2:26pm
Absolutely Kate! With the right people around, you can't imagine needing anything else.
Thank you ; )
Thank you ; )
Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 4:20pm
Ha ha... I like the attitude. Turn lemons to lemonade? Not a chance... Not when there's lemon liqueur to be had. :D
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Re: Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 6:05pm
I like the way you think. I'm more of making coconut milk into coquito, but your idea is good too....lol
As always, I enjoy your visits Neo...... Gracias ; )
As always, I enjoy your visits Neo...... Gracias ; )
Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 5:43pm
I want to be there. I can see the festivities and it is quite enjoyable.
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Re: Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 6:11pm
lol....oh thank you MartenHoyle. It's great to meet you!
If I begin to tell you stories, it will be as if you were....lol..... we always have a blast ; )
If I begin to tell you stories, it will be as if you were....lol..... we always have a blast ; )
Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 6:05pm
I love the warmth i felt from the setting you created in the beginning made me feel as though a celebration was about to take place. You many truths...life is really to short and truth always makes itself known...i enjoyed reading this
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Re: Re. Toast to You
Ms. Lyricalmiss, it is an honor to have you visit my page.
Yes, at this time of the year, I love to decorate my place and have blinking lights, music, food, drinks, and surrounded by people that make you laugh or smile. Even those you can bring a smile to, by including them into your celebration. In Puerto Rico, we make everything better with food and dancing. Celebrating something and letting go of the rest.
Thank you so much for the read and comment ; )
Yes, at this time of the year, I love to decorate my place and have blinking lights, music, food, drinks, and surrounded by people that make you laugh or smile. Even those you can bring a smile to, by including them into your celebration. In Puerto Rico, we make everything better with food and dancing. Celebrating something and letting go of the rest.
Thank you so much for the read and comment ; )
Re. Toast to You
Anonymous
19th Nov 2015 7:36pm
Lena, my sister.. this sounds like a celebration to me.. great food, better booze, and best friends.. what a wonderful write.. hope i'm on the invite list.. really enjoyed this write.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Toast to You
20th Nov 2015 1:51pm
lol....thank you Dave, I enjoy your support always.
about the invite, you wouldn't want to be the ONLY man among all women, would you? (hehe)
about the invite, you wouldn't want to be the ONLY man among all women, would you? (hehe)
Re. Toast to You
19th Nov 2015 11:58pm
I'd give my left 'but' to be where u are celebrating with ya my sweetness! Sweet imagery n thoughts here. :)
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Re: Re. Toast to You
20th Nov 2015 1:55pm
LOL......I just can't with you Poe, you are so funny.
thank you so much for wanting to celebrate with me and your awesome support ; )
thank you so much for wanting to celebrate with me and your awesome support ; )
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Re: Re. Toast to You
lmaooooooooo! OMG you're hilarious! Police uniform? That would certainly start a riot with my girls....lol... I can't stop laughing.
I'm touched that I had you dancing. I can tell you're a great dancing partner.
Yes, to dance and drink in hand, other times decorations in hand ; )
Great comment, gracias!
I'm touched that I had you dancing. I can tell you're a great dancing partner.
Yes, to dance and drink in hand, other times decorations in hand ; )
Great comment, gracias!
Re. Toast to You
20th Nov 2015 9:22pm
turn up then, sounds like you have a blast, a poem as colorful as christmas lights...
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Re: Re. Toast to You
22nd Nov 2015 5:34am
Re. Toast to You
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2015 4:44pm
Salute' Lena!!
In the end true friendships who are based on giving and not expecting anything in return are the ones which prevail.
Viva il dolce stil' nuovo to all women and new beginnings in this holiday season, Cheers girl!
In the end true friendships who are based on giving and not expecting anything in return are the ones which prevail.
Viva il dolce stil' nuovo to all women and new beginnings in this holiday season, Cheers girl!
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Re: Re. Toast to You
23rd Nov 2015 5:05pm
Vee you're here!
You are definitely a woman who can give a great toast and fun to be around.
Thank you querida ; )
You are definitely a woman who can give a great toast and fun to be around.
Thank you querida ; )
Re. Toast to You
4th Dec 2015 3:17pm
I love what I see,
the smells,
the sounds all are
so vivid here. Very
textural as I did not
want to leave.
Was enwraped fully
in the moment, so
yes enjoy beautiful
Lena.
-Howlings
the smells,
the sounds all are
so vivid here. Very
textural as I did not
want to leave.
Was enwraped fully
in the moment, so
yes enjoy beautiful
Lena.
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Toast to You
4th Dec 2015 3:34pm
What a beautiful comment Howlings, thank you!
It's funny because my friends say they can smell the food before I open the door and they know they will eat well....lol
So happy you were able to experience it in ways too. Love having that affect on people ; )
It's funny because my friends say they can smell the food before I open the door and they know they will eat well....lol
So happy you were able to experience it in ways too. Love having that affect on people ; )
Re. Toast to You
Anonymous
6th Dec 2015 4:37am
Sexy Lena.......this a great tribute.....really enjoyed this exciting write......cheers....lifting my glass to you.....luv and hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Toast to You
10th Dec 2015 6:53pm
Thank you mamacita! It's so good to see you again.....xoxoxo
Salud mami!
(Raising my glass)
Salud mami!
(Raising my glass)
Re. Toast to You
9th Dec 2015 3:50pm
...man...I didn't get an invite.....and i have home made bread for the toast....if you livelife to the fullest it will never be too short
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Re: Re. Toast to You
10th Dec 2015 6:59pm
Sorry, I didn't know you then or when.
while it was all women, I will still send a toast to you.
.......uh, but a nice bread basket would be great as a thoughtful contribution ; )
Thanks for the visit. I've enjoyed your work.
while it was all women, I will still send a toast to you.
.......uh, but a nice bread basket would be great as a thoughtful contribution ; )
Thanks for the visit. I've enjoyed your work.
Re. Toast to You
18th Dec 2015 4:41pm
Sounds like my perfect night (: this was a nice write
Life is to short
For the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end.
I loved that part. Thanks for sharing (:
Life is to short
For the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end.
I loved that part. Thanks for sharing (:
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Re: Re. Toast to You
18th Dec 2015 6:26pm
I'm glad you liked it. It's always fun to get with the girls once in a while ; )
Love your comment
Love your comment
Re. Toast to You
5th Jan 2016 9:17pm
Life is short
for the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end.
I used to be one of those...
I love the familiarity of the piece... yes, it sounds like a great party!
for the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end.
I used to be one of those...
I love the familiarity of the piece... yes, it sounds like a great party!
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Re: Re. Toast to You
6th Jan 2016 3:04pm
This is a great pleasure Hepcat61
Yes, life has shown me over and over again that the truth always prevails in the end. It may take a while, but it always reveals itself. I count on it.
.....and yes, I'm a little famous for hosting at my place. My new kitchen makes it better too ; )
Thank you so much for stopping by ; )
Yes, life has shown me over and over again that the truth always prevails in the end. It may take a while, but it always reveals itself. I count on it.
.....and yes, I'm a little famous for hosting at my place. My new kitchen makes it better too ; )
Thank you so much for stopping by ; )
Re. Toast to You
22nd May 2017 5:14pm
Lena, I am glad to discover you mediante your reading my piece. This piece is packed with wisdom and very identifiable feelings. This passage is awesome:
"pulled by undertow beneath veils
in a sea of darkness groping for light
searching for honesty and truth
in a deceptive world
when all hope is gone."
The image of the undertow enhances the idea of hopelessness and inability to control life. I also enjoy your hopeful conclusion.
"Life is short
for the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end. "
It's taken me a lifetime to understand this. Muy muy bien escrito....bravisima!
"pulled by undertow beneath veils
in a sea of darkness groping for light
searching for honesty and truth
in a deceptive world
when all hope is gone."
The image of the undertow enhances the idea of hopelessness and inability to control life. I also enjoy your hopeful conclusion.
"Life is short
for the mundane
who never mean what they say
truth will always prevail in the end. "
It's taken me a lifetime to understand this. Muy muy bien escrito....bravisima!
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Re: Re. Toast to You
22nd May 2017 7:18pm
You've touched my heart with this comment GW. I love it! This piece is extremely special to me at a great moment in my life and your comment made it that much more special. Thank you papi
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22nd May 2017 8:04pm