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Fuck the words when moans say it all
The torrid kisses
delicious drip-tongue-dip
with every scalding slip
daring to bump and grind
your eyes on my
panty
L
E
S
S
crotch
Molesting the present
legs thrown at throes
twisting mindless sex
shifting beneath weight
petal-to-metal
lewd
L
U
S
T
vex
On lookers watching
watchers silently licking
yearning for a drop-to-cup
on their dagger tongue
nasty is the new delicacy
ohhhh
P
A
P
I
tell me
How do you want me?
on my knees, divine pussy
riding the chocolate stick
rocking eternal destruction
twisting my nipples
burning
R
U
B
Y
lips
Damnation to devotion
french twirl of passions
creamy thighs ignited
succubus in abyss
wanton ascent to hell
point of no
R
E
T
U
R
N
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Just fuck
the
words.
Published 2nd Nov 2015
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2015 6:35pm
Lena, i really enjoyed this write.. full of passion, and desire.. very hot indeed.. with love..
Dave
Dave
5th Nov 2015 1:34am
Thank you so much Dave. You are always supportive and I appreciate it ; )
Stay tuned, I may add to this.
Stay tuned, I may add to this.
2nd Nov 2015 9:01pm
Damn!!! This is becoming a ‘moist Monday’ on DU. lol….
Fuckin’ while adding a few dirty words with moans, does make for a good combo though. lmbo
Love this steamy write! The design and flow of this ink is creatively witty, Lena.
Sexy with a little spice. Me likey! :)
Fuckin’ while adding a few dirty words with moans, does make for a good combo though. lmbo
Love this steamy write! The design and flow of this ink is creatively witty, Lena.
Sexy with a little spice. Me likey! :)
5th Nov 2015 1:48am
Lmbooooooo!
I heard of thirsty Thursdays, flashback Friday and now moist Monday - love it! (still laughing)
I'm honored and humbled humbled by your compliment mamacita.
You are always empowering and infectious with your positive energy......xoxo
Thank you ; )
I heard of thirsty Thursdays, flashback Friday and now moist Monday - love it! (still laughing)
I'm honored and humbled humbled by your compliment mamacita.
You are always empowering and infectious with your positive energy......xoxo
Thank you ; )
2nd Nov 2015 11:25pm
moans definitely speaks volume when you in that moment with that special someone... this ink is fantastic and sexy :D
5th Nov 2015 1:51am
I agree about how much moans speak volumes in that moment with that someone Magic.
I'm happy you liked it and thank you for commenting ; )
I'm happy you liked it and thank you for commenting ; )
2nd Nov 2015 11:26pm
Lol I'm right there with Rain, fuckin, dirty words n moanin!? Well it made me thirsty for some panty-less choochie coo! lol... Very hott my dear! :)
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2015 2:19pm
There are so many elements in this poem besides the fact that its subtle sexy erotica, which most often its not easy to pull off.
The play of words, the sounds, the rhythm and flow so effortless and ease with wit and charm...and hey not let's forget classs with zazzz makes me wish i had written this lol
This is one of the best i read in erotic category, very clever Lena..i'm so proud of you, i'm really enjoying your confidence SEXY as hell..:)
The play of words, the sounds, the rhythm and flow so effortless and ease with wit and charm...and hey not let's forget classs with zazzz makes me wish i had written this lol
This is one of the best i read in erotic category, very clever Lena..i'm so proud of you, i'm really enjoying your confidence SEXY as hell..:)
5th Nov 2015 2:31am
Wow! I feel like I've been among royalty here.
I have learned and continue to learn so much from you and this is the result....lol
By the way, I'm thinking of making this poem into a spoken word.
Thank you so much for those beautiful words of praise.
I have learned and continue to learn so much from you and this is the result....lol
By the way, I'm thinking of making this poem into a spoken word.
Thank you so much for those beautiful words of praise.
5th Nov 2015 2:21am
Lena, a very sexy write. Loved the style and form. It was seamless and smooth. Just wonderfully hot.
Keith
Keith
5th Nov 2015 2:36am
It's great to meet you and Keith and thank you for the great compliment ; )
I appreciate you subscribing too.
I appreciate you subscribing too.
5th Nov 2015 6:08pm
Lena, the sexual intensity in this piece is delicious. The build is awesome. It is a beautiful tingle-bringer. Bravisima!
6th Nov 2015 1:24pm
5th Nov 2015 6:47pm
fiery from the first word, such a voluptuous form, fuck words when umm umm umm says it all, nice...
6th Nov 2015 1:25pm
6th Nov 2015 1:35pm
freak nastyyyy lol. reminded me of this one time.. dammnnnn. you know whats crazy is he always wanted me do talk dirty, but at the moment i wouldnt have voice.. but yet he always said he loved the sounds i made.. hmmmm lol anyways this is super hot!
lol....I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm going to tell you a secret, my words can be very vulgar too, mostly in spanish....lol........but the sounds can be super hot when it's so intense, ya can't speak ; )
Thank you for reading, commenting and adding it to your list ; )
I'm going to tell you a secret, my words can be very vulgar too, mostly in spanish....lol........but the sounds can be super hot when it's so intense, ya can't speak ; )
Thank you for reading, commenting and adding it to your list ; )
9th Nov 2015 8:56am
9th Nov 2015 12:52pm
Thank you, I think....lol
glad you enjoyed it
Welcome to DUP TattooingPoet!
glad you enjoyed it
Welcome to DUP TattooingPoet!
Anonymous
11th Nov 2015 9:11pm
Wow Lena you are pegging the Lusto- meter with that one.
I personally cannot wait until the spoken version!!
Very nice
I personally cannot wait until the spoken version!!
Very nice
12th Nov 2015 2:42pm
This is an honor Slowgasm, thank you!
My schedule has been very hectic, but it should slow down soon and then......
My schedule has been very hectic, but it should slow down soon and then......
16th Nov 2015 8:48pm
Intense! If a picture's worth a thousand words, then this is the exception that proves the rule. :)
19th Nov 2015 00:41am
Hi Neo! I appreciate your visits and comments. You always make me think ; )
Gracias!
Gracias!
Anonymous
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20th Nov 2015 8:17am
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20th Nov 2015 2:24pm
Thank you Tod and excellent observation! I hope to do a spoke word on this sometime soon ; )
Anonymous
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23rd Nov 2015 3:04pm
It's been a long while Miss Lena and somehow
I want to quote every verse of this,
but my gosh it is a delectable piece of sexiness..
thank you for sharing this one..!
I want to quote every verse of this,
but my gosh it is a delectable piece of sexiness..
thank you for sharing this one..!
23rd Nov 2015 4:08pm
Ms.HowlingWhelms, its wonderful to see you!
Thank you for such wondeful compliment and gracing my page.
I'm happy you found it sexy and wanted to quote every line.
You made me blush ; )
Thank you for such wondeful compliment and gracing my page.
I'm happy you found it sexy and wanted to quote every line.
You made me blush ; )
Anonymous
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24th Nov 2015 11:25pm
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26th Nov 2015 10:46pm
9th Dec 2015 3:56pm
..I say all kinds of crazy shit in my head...but usually the only thing out of my mouth is aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmm......hot poem...liked it!!
10th Dec 2015 7:38pm
lol....thanks Satan!.
Some take what's inside their head and can't help but express it out loud, It's all hot ; )
Some take what's inside their head and can't help but express it out loud, It's all hot ; )
18th Dec 2015 4:44pm
Omg lol this was great!!! Love me some x-rated poems!
Love how you brought in each new stanza as well. Added to reading list (:
Love how you brought in each new stanza as well. Added to reading list (:
18th Dec 2015 6:34pm
Oh I can tell you and I are gonna get along so well.......lol........ I have several.
So glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for the RL as well ; )
So glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for the RL as well ; )
18th Dec 2015 6:58pm
Lol aww yayyy haha yes I agree! I will have I check out your others than and no problem
5th Mar 2017 5:03am
this is the kinda vibe that makes a man man grin
throughout..
"petal-to-metal"..oh that visual stuck to the cerebral wlls
"succubus in abyss
wanton ascent to hell
point of no
R
E
T
U
R
N "
as it should be..
invigorating erotica
from top to bottom..
throughout..
"petal-to-metal"..oh that visual stuck to the cerebral wlls
"succubus in abyss
wanton ascent to hell
point of no
R
E
T
U
R
N "
as it should be..
invigorating erotica
from top to bottom..
9th Mar 2017 4:59pm
Mr.Naajir, this is an incredible honor to see you comment on my page. I'm glad it made a man of your calibre smile. Gracias!
6th Mar 2017 5:51am
Very erotically intense, worded so boldly and the descriptions so juicy and vivid, damn near mouth watering
I'm blushing because I've become a fan of your ink. I don't have a lot of time to comment yet, but this is an honor. Mouth watering is what I aim for lol. Gracias papi
10th Mar 2017 4:23am
Im flattered that you've even taken the time to read them (me) that is the greatest compliment for me
22nd May 2017 5:19pm
Lena, this piece makes me tingle all over. The build is so titillating, super vivid and beautifully sensual. Brava sexy poet!
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29th Sep 2017 8:02pm
your best
let it rest
shame again's
the best
so many comments
no laments
creative scents
all over
spread along with legs
guys will need
many large pegs
let it rest
shame again's
the best
so many comments
no laments
creative scents
all over
spread along with legs
guys will need
many large pegs
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