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Though kinked
plumbing relegates
my pump to struggles
fitting the tank,
don't despair
for my tongue's
volunteered
to shoulder
the responsibilities
of your pleasure .
Trained to twirl
within cherub
cheeks the lingual
organ traces
the sweet folds
about your hips
in long lavish
strokes licking
every salty drop
till it plunges into
the pink selflessly
lashing lips till like
a blooming amaryllis
you explode white
hot and crimson.
plumbing relegates
my pump to struggles
fitting the tank,
don't despair
for my tongue's
volunteered
to shoulder
the responsibilities
of your pleasure .
Trained to twirl
within cherub
cheeks the lingual
organ traces
the sweet folds
about your hips
in long lavish
strokes licking
every salty drop
till it plunges into
the pink selflessly
lashing lips till like
a blooming amaryllis
you explode white
hot and crimson.
Published 16th Nov 2015
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16th Nov 2015 5:20am
16th Nov 2015 7:08pm
Tony, good stuff here man
I took away the extreme warning cos I think you've written this with a nice subtlety. some really good lines in here, I especially liked
"my tongue's
volunteered
to shoulder
the responsibilities
of your pleasure ."
anyhow, shine on man
I took away the extreme warning cos I think you've written this with a nice subtlety. some really good lines in here, I especially liked
"my tongue's
volunteered
to shoulder
the responsibilities
of your pleasure ."
anyhow, shine on man
Great to hear from you , Eamonn ! Though this world takes dark turns I will do my best to shine on with my fellow crazy diamonds ! Thank you so much for the kind words
