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First Affair
I was 24
She was 30
Beautiful and sensual
A woman of experience
She was also my supervisor
In a dead end job
We were office drones
In a large boring corporation
We drank ourselves silly on Friday nights
Then made out on the platform
Waiting for her train
Back to a husband who didn't fit
It went on for years
Didn't end well
I loved her too much
Would I ever love again I wondered
She was 30
Beautiful and sensual
A woman of experience
She was also my supervisor
In a dead end job
We were office drones
In a large boring corporation
We drank ourselves silly on Friday nights
Then made out on the platform
Waiting for her train
Back to a husband who didn't fit
It went on for years
Didn't end well
I loved her too much
Would I ever love again I wondered
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Re. First Affair
15th Nov 2015 2:55am
Stolen love, as you would say. I know this, he wasn't married but our age gap proved too difficult. You very good at sharing glimpses of your life Mr. P. The story unfolds perfectly and easy to grasp. Loves.
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15th Nov 2015 3:41pm
Re. First Affair
15th Nov 2015 4:25am
We always wonder if there's another stepping stone large enough to hold us.
There always has been.
There always has been.
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Re: Re. First Affair
15th Nov 2015 3:42pm
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15th Nov 2015 3:43pm
Yes, different but satisfying, but she was off the charts, I must admit. ...
Re. First Affair
15th Nov 2015 5:11pm
Some love affairs are going to hurt forever ... literal dead ends.
A moving poem, Speak.
A moving poem, Speak.
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15th Nov 2015 6:37pm
Brought back a lot of memories when I wrote this, but many moons ago. We both moved on nicely I believe ....
Re. First Affair
15th Nov 2015 6:05pm
sounds like an exciting time Poet I believe there will be more on your horizon..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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15th Nov 2015 6:39pm
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15th Nov 2015 9:27pm
Re. First Affair
16th Nov 2015 11:55am
my first affair was similar I was a bot younger and she a bit older, luckily she wasn't married. She is virtually the only one I still think of fondly, aint life strange :-)
excellent write :-)
excellent write :-)
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Re. First Affair
16th Nov 2015 1:10pm
It's kinda like puppy live, you live so hard and your tail gets stepped on.
Part of the process ....
Part of the process ....
Re. First Affair
16th Nov 2015 9:19pm
Re. First Affair
16th Nov 2015 10:07pm