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The Devil's Playground
I play here often
dancing in the fire
feeling the flames
lick my pussy
burning, writhing with desire
thirsting for your essence
you withhold from me
cruelly you make my body
twist in the wind
dancing for you
my operatic ballet
for the Devil's pleasure
you watch from afar
playing me like a guitar
whose strings have snapped
playing the obscene songs
I still know amongst the smoke
that burns from the pyre you are
twisting in the wind for your pleasure
pussy always exposed you catch my scent
hunting me down as a wolf does it's prey
you own my cunt, it's yours you've left your mark
this is the Devil's playground
I entered it's gates
of my own free will
playing with the darkness in you
I got burned, licking my wounds
I'm coming for you though
the demoness in me a huntress
with powers of persuasion
even in your black tower I know you feel me
shadowing your steps
as you do mine
licking your cum
as you plaster it on the page
tasting you reveling in your disease
this is the Devil's game
you won the first round
let's play again
I'm always down
Published 12th Nov 2015
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Anonymous
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12th Nov 2015 8:11pm
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15th Nov 2015 5:32pm
thank you my beautiful one for such a loving response to me and this write :)
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
12th Nov 2015 8:19pm
Crim, your dark poems always seem to arouse me in some way. All the fire and cum, and now in this infernal playground. There are no rules where you go. Enjoyed this, much!
15th Nov 2015 5:32pm
12th Nov 2015 8:40pm
Loved this Crim! Once again you lead me astray. You might just be the reigning queen of this playground.
"shadowing your steps
as you do mine
licking your cum
as you plaster it on the page
tasting your reveling in your disease"
Who needs a cure? This brings out the demon in me....
"shadowing your steps
as you do mine
licking your cum
as you plaster it on the page
tasting your reveling in your disease"
Who needs a cure? This brings out the demon in me....
15th Nov 2015 5:34pm
12th Nov 2015 8:58pm
I read a poem today by Devlin and thought I was losing it for being aroused by sinister ink but damnnn! I guess that's how dark ink appear to be rolling lately! Or maybe I'm just freakier than I thought I was, or maybe I have hidden desires to fuck a man wearing a Satan mask; who knows. What I do know is this ink was demonically delightful, Crim! Me likessss....
15th Nov 2015 5:37pm
thank you lovely Rain couldn't hope for a better reaction to this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
12th Nov 2015 9:14pm
Brenda, this is fucking brilliantly dark.. loved every word.. just beautifully penned with your crimsin ink.. wish i could add this one to my list.. all out of space.. with love..
Dave
Dave
15th Nov 2015 5:38pm
13th Nov 2015 1:21am
Kinda had a HARD time gettin past
the "lickin your cum" verse lol wow... Yea... lol
the "lickin your cum" verse lol wow... Yea... lol
15th Nov 2015 5:39pm
13th Nov 2015 6:33am
15th Nov 2015 5:40pm
13th Nov 2015 1:14pm
I love the mixture of ballet and flames - not sure if it was means but i also love the idea of dancing for your life :-)
:-)
:-)
15th Nov 2015 5:41pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jun 2024 1:45am
13th Nov 2015 1:28pm
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15th Nov 2015 5:42pm
thank you Daddy for your thoughts on this write I love your poetry as well :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
13th Nov 2015 5:06pm
. . .Miss Crim. . .what a delicious and erotically wicked 'Playground'. . .
15th Nov 2015 5:44pm
thank you Lady Devlin my Queen of Darkness for the idea to write this and for such an awesome comment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
14th Nov 2015 5:19am
This is some real hot and steamy shizz...i really enjoyed your metaphors...i love the incoperation if music...playing strings...this was nice
15th Nov 2015 5:45pm
14th Nov 2015 9:30pm
15th Nov 2015 5:46pm
15th Nov 2015 6:55pm
"shadowing your steps
as you do mine
licking your cum
as you plaster it on the page
tasting you reveling in your disease
this is the Devil's game
you won the first round
let's play again
I'm always down" - .. . Smiles and growls for this exquisite darkness!! Utterly satisfying! blue angel
as you do mine
licking your cum
as you plaster it on the page
tasting you reveling in your disease
this is the Devil's game
you won the first round
let's play again
I'm always down" - .. . Smiles and growls for this exquisite darkness!! Utterly satisfying! blue angel
16th Nov 2015 3:27pm
16th Nov 2015 8:12pm
17th Nov 2015 3:34pm
