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Beguiled
in a deep slumber
I could feel you summoning
cumming as called
what can a whore
do for you on this morn?
feeling your bite
I've been collared
and set straight
feeling you last night
creaming for you alone
what is this power you wield???
that a seductress like me
would be brought to her knees
kneeling before your cock
confessing my sin
wanton whore for the powers that be
each had a go to no avail
you took me there showing me your real face
revealing my true Master
tasting me, touching me
our soul's flavors intermingling
finding my place under your dominion
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding
thunder struck, stars fell
I feel the power you posess
Published 12th Nov 2015
| Edited 13th Nov 2015
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12th Nov 2015 2:41pm
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13th Nov 2015 7:05pm
thank you beautiful one for all the love you've shown me and my writes..
you put a big smile on my face with you lovely comments and understanding of this write :)
I love you so much..
xoxoxo Brenda
you put a big smile on my face with you lovely comments and understanding of this write :)
I love you so much..
xoxoxo Brenda
Anonymous
12th Nov 2015 4:32pm
"our soul's flavors intermingling
finding my place under your dominion
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding"
I am such a guy, but this picture, and the one you provided above, have me and my morning coffee hot!
finding my place under your dominion
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding"
I am such a guy, but this picture, and the one you provided above, have me and my morning coffee hot!
13th Nov 2015 7:07pm
thank you most graciously Sir for such a great response to this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
12th Nov 2015 5:24pm
'Beguiled' by a dominant submissive. . .it's hard to ignore her willingness. . .dark & beautiful, my Queen, as always. . .xo, Devlin.
13th Nov 2015 7:08pm
thank you Queen of Darkness Lady Devlin for such a gracious comment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
12th Nov 2015 6:31pm
Brenda, oh Brenda.. powerful from start to finish.. you never fail to deliver.. these lines caught my eyes..
confessing my sin
wanton whore for the powers that be
each had a go to no avail
you took me there showing me your real face
revealing my true Master
and..
our soul's flavors intermingling
finding my place under your dominion
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding
thunder struck, stars fell
I feel the power you posess
brilliantly done.. like the poetess you are.. into my list it goes.. with love..
Dave
confessing my sin
wanton whore for the powers that be
each had a go to no avail
you took me there showing me your real face
revealing my true Master
and..
our soul's flavors intermingling
finding my place under your dominion
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding
thunder struck, stars fell
I feel the power you posess
brilliantly done.. like the poetess you are.. into my list it goes.. with love..
Dave
13th Nov 2015 7:13pm
12th Nov 2015 6:48pm
the joining of two souls happens infrequently,
so it must be something to treasure.
there is fire & passion in your poetry, Crim...
so it must be something to treasure.
there is fire & passion in your poetry, Crim...
13th Nov 2015 7:14pm
thank you kindly John though this is more like the fucking of two souls sigh..
love Crim
love Crim
12th Nov 2015 10:55pm
You had me pinned to my crucifix which reading this, Crim. Heat and your words and reverence in your eyes. And you end with understanding. Beautiful.
13th Nov 2015 7:22pm
Anonymous
12th Nov 2015 11:21pm
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13th Nov 2015 7:23pm
13th Nov 2015 4:21am
Brenda,
Such a lustful write.
Could truly feel the
want and hunger in
words. Such a fortunate
Man.
Keith
Such a lustful write.
Could truly feel the
want and hunger in
words. Such a fortunate
Man.
Keith
13th Nov 2015 7:31pm
13th Nov 2015 1:08pm
another excellent poem left pounding in my ear and my imagination :-)
Love it :-)
Love it :-)
13th Nov 2015 7:32pm
13th Nov 2015 9:11pm
Oh Lady Crim... Amazing write... PLEASE get Your Poetic chat book together the world needs to read your work !
XOXO
Fire
XOXO
Fire
15th Nov 2015 5:48pm
14th Nov 2015 8:29pm
15th Nov 2015 5:49pm
15th Nov 2015 6:48pm
"our soul's flavors intermingling
finding my place under your dominion
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding"... - dynamite! Always blown away by your delicate handling of searing imagery! Always a pleasure, - blue angel
finding my place under your dominion
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding"... - dynamite! Always blown away by your delicate handling of searing imagery! Always a pleasure, - blue angel
16th Nov 2015 3:26pm
