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Convictions Reign
I've been prone to hard daydream
sighing too long into night seams,
oils burning far past wondering..
.. will shadows lift my suffering?
I wade in mindspace not my own
embracing melancholia tones..
auratic touch grown fiercely cold..
.. will shadowed wing be all I hold?
[cursed Fates should never be so bold!]
My sorrow leaks as darkest rain,
most greedy bleed of warming waves
disguising hurtful silence lain.
Grasping at mantra, myth and name,
-convictions of a worthy pain-
through memories and blushing stains..
I chant my wishful neverwane..
.. to shadows.. wandering away.
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10th Nov 2015 10:00pm
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 10:21pm
Embracing you in those perfect sissy lap snuggles.. *truly the safest place in my world!
I loveloves you fer solacing me w/ shinies always, Sweet Sissy ODFK..! *mwahmwahnibble
~> holdin your words close ..my eyes pooling grateful, as I echo your *forever ..
ever maulin you in hearts n kisses,
~d ...of T`n`T
I loveloves you fer solacing me w/ shinies always, Sweet Sissy ODFK..! *mwahmwahnibble
~> holdin your words close ..my eyes pooling grateful, as I echo your *forever ..
ever maulin you in hearts n kisses,
~d ...of T`n`T
Re. Convictions Reign
10th Nov 2015 10:18pm
This is magic, Tanya. This is a good one to be read aloud, almost like a chant.
"I wade in mindspace not my own
embracing melancholia tones..
auratic touch grown fiercely cold..
.. will shadowed wing be all I hold?"
This is gorgeous writing even if read silently. Melancholia might be welcome if it results in lines like these. I love the image of the "shadowed wing" particularly. Lovely work T!
"I wade in mindspace not my own
embracing melancholia tones..
auratic touch grown fiercely cold..
.. will shadowed wing be all I hold?"
This is gorgeous writing even if read silently. Melancholia might be welcome if it results in lines like these. I love the image of the "shadowed wing" particularly. Lovely work T!
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 10:48pm
my sweetest thankins T2..
you always manage to awe & lift my spirits w/your presence and warm words.
sending you sparkles of gratitude & grin fer supporting my dark demands of the hour here ;)
honored.. & huggin your pure heart everly..[wings too!]
~T
you always manage to awe & lift my spirits w/your presence and warm words.
sending you sparkles of gratitude & grin fer supporting my dark demands of the hour here ;)
honored.. & huggin your pure heart everly..[wings too!]
~T
Re. Convictions Reign
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Nov 2015 10:20pm
10th Nov 2015 10:19pm
"I've been prone to hard daydream" . . .
and those "hard daydreams" become harder still
when the daydreams become "night seems."
When we "wade in mindspace not my (our) own
it can surely as day follows night put us on a
kaleidoscope journey which will turn our thoughts
to running away from fear and we can only
"chant my wishful neverwane..
.. to shadows.. wandering away."
and those "hard daydreams" become harder still
when the daydreams become "night seems."
When we "wade in mindspace not my (our) own
it can surely as day follows night put us on a
kaleidoscope journey which will turn our thoughts
to running away from fear and we can only
"chant my wishful neverwane..
.. to shadows.. wandering away."
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 11:01pm
yes sir, Jerrydears.. can only agree on that "kaleidoscope journey" <~great poem in there too!
must chant/beg/demand thru ruff spots.. maybe not that order--lol-- but definitely chanting first..
we shall see.. ;) *dark giggles and my thankins always for your wisdoms!
much luvin respect, sweet misters,
~d
must chant/beg/demand thru ruff spots.. maybe not that order--lol-- but definitely chanting first..
we shall see.. ;) *dark giggles and my thankins always for your wisdoms!
much luvin respect, sweet misters,
~d
Re. Convictions Reign
10th Nov 2015 10:23pm
Wow... Deeply somber stuff... Impressively composed though
a dark, sad, heart pour of ink...
a dark, sad, heart pour of ink...
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 11:10pm
My somber heartpour does sweetly ty, dearest..
*humbled to smile every time, you do know?!
we all get The days.. and you are most appreciated fer takin time!
darkly a'curtsy to your sweet self,
~d
*humbled to smile every time, you do know?!
we all get The days.. and you are most appreciated fer takin time!
darkly a'curtsy to your sweet self,
~d
Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 2:51am
lovely d~ I'm wading in deep waters here..
with lines like these..
"My sorrow leaks as darkest rain,
most greedy bleed of warming waves
disguising hurtful silence lain.
Grasping at mantra, myth and name,
-convictions of a worthy pain-
through memories and blushing stains..
I chant my wishful neverwane..
.. to shadows.. wandering away."
loving you beautiful lady feeling the sorrow of this write..
love Brenda
with lines like these..
"My sorrow leaks as darkest rain,
most greedy bleed of warming waves
disguising hurtful silence lain.
Grasping at mantra, myth and name,
-convictions of a worthy pain-
through memories and blushing stains..
I chant my wishful neverwane..
.. to shadows.. wandering away."
loving you beautiful lady feeling the sorrow of this write..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 11:18pm
You touch my heart with your words, dear Brenda..
ty so much for the visit... always, you are cherished ladyluv,
dark *mwahs,
~d
ty so much for the visit... always, you are cherished ladyluv,
dark *mwahs,
~d
Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 4:16am
Dearest Tanya,
This is a beautifully written. Very nice flow and rhyme. I would really
love it if I could not feel the true sorrow and pain in it. My eyes fill as I read these lines. I hope that these
feeling and haunting images both day and night subside. I have always found that the night is the worse. Much easier to occupy the mind during the day. Sweet and so caring Lady you deserve all the happiness that is possible. You always bring light and warmth to me each and every time you stop by on my page. I send love and well wishes to you.
Keith
This is a beautifully written. Very nice flow and rhyme. I would really
love it if I could not feel the true sorrow and pain in it. My eyes fill as I read these lines. I hope that these
feeling and haunting images both day and night subside. I have always found that the night is the worse. Much easier to occupy the mind during the day. Sweet and so caring Lady you deserve all the happiness that is possible. You always bring light and warmth to me each and every time you stop by on my page. I send love and well wishes to you.
Keith
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 11:33pm
*huggin those owies my write caused you misters Keith.. and adoring your heartfelt words..
warm blesses to your soul, we are *even on shinies as I reply w/ deepest snifflin' ty's--
-- I always wish you the same shiny hours!!
loves & treasure your friendship & support, sweetie,
~T
warm blesses to your soul, we are *even on shinies as I reply w/ deepest snifflin' ty's--
-- I always wish you the same shiny hours!!
loves & treasure your friendship & support, sweetie,
~T
Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 4:59am
so bleak of sorrow,
harrowing maiden, captive of the shadows.
such elegance in your gothique...
harrowing maiden, captive of the shadows.
such elegance in your gothique...
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
12th Nov 2015 00:47am
'Tis my pleasure to have your stellar presence.. and your words, solidly on target, as always...
[yep, jus that damn good, you are!] ;)
curtsies do thank you kindly, SirJ.. & wish you shiny hours..
~d
[yep, jus that damn good, you are!] ;)
curtsies do thank you kindly, SirJ.. & wish you shiny hours..
~d
Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 9:00am
Hello darlin... Very groovy ma friend; this read good when readin in both in my head, and out loud, not always able to be done in writing for me, its usually one of the other with me, hehehe,,,very well done chica... Ahh, the power of bein alone, and yet this ones not entirely alone, there is something there also not completely your characters own, and yet, the mind wonderings, and the sacrifice, out fukin standin my friend, very well done... Hows every little thing darlin: wolf
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
12th Nov 2015 8:07am
Hot damn, it's sweet ta see you on my pages misters Eddie!..
..honored to know this read out well & must darkly giggle a bit at the male timbre
reading it. ;) ..such a lovely gesture & much appreciated.
You are ever insightful & I'm not *even surprised that you read so rightly into this..;)
Sending huggs & warm thankins fer taking time on me & hope life is spoiling you, darlin..
curtsies, my dear Wolf pal,
~d
..honored to know this read out well & must darkly giggle a bit at the male timbre
reading it. ;) ..such a lovely gesture & much appreciated.
You are ever insightful & I'm not *even surprised that you read so rightly into this..;)
Sending huggs & warm thankins fer taking time on me & hope life is spoiling you, darlin..
curtsies, my dear Wolf pal,
~d
Re. Convictions Reign
11th Nov 2015 8:26pm
Re: Re. Convictions Reign
12th Nov 2015 8:40am
Always most awesome to hear from you, m'friend.. sweet thanx for takin time!
catchin up this wk & truly appreciate your words on my page ;) tyty..
warm wishes & respect,
~d
catchin up this wk & truly appreciate your words on my page ;) tyty..
warm wishes & respect,
~d
Re. Convictions Reign
12th Nov 2015 2:50am
Baby muffin..this is melancholy bliss.
If there were such a thing..
Cant imAgine you er shadowed..with the pure light you bring...
You illuminate me..and do others the same....
We shine with brightest love for you..
And would all wear your pain
I love you Sighs
My dear friend and epic teacher...
Giggles and kisses dove.
Calamity of Jennifer
If there were such a thing..
Cant imAgine you er shadowed..with the pure light you bring...
You illuminate me..and do others the same....
We shine with brightest love for you..
And would all wear your pain
I love you Sighs
My dear friend and epic teacher...
Giggles and kisses dove.
Calamity of Jennifer
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
12th Nov 2015 9:18am
awwes Creampuff.. you shake my knees & ka-thump my heart w/your beautiful words!
spanx n *mwahs ..
I cherish you endlessly fer watchin over me & spreading solace w/ your healing balms
[juuuss right too].. so I say-- ...we oh-so-shiny, together ;)
got me gigglin' madly to be to be on your heart list, my Jenpen ..I loves you too.. hard!
wicked-like baby muffin maulins,
~T
spanx n *mwahs ..
I cherish you endlessly fer watchin over me & spreading solace w/ your healing balms
[juuuss right too].. so I say-- ...we oh-so-shiny, together ;)
got me gigglin' madly to be to be on your heart list, my Jenpen ..I loves you too.. hard!
wicked-like baby muffin maulins,
~T
Re. Convictions Reign
12th Nov 2015 3:25am
A wonderful peace, laden with the beauty of the shadows, the darkness within, outstanding.
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Re: Re. Convictions Reign
12th Nov 2015 9:42am
sweet smiles of thanx fer your most amazing comment & resonating insights..
I truly appreciate that you see beauty in the shadows, dear poet of kindred mindspace..
..keeps us sharing works from within.. [luvin ur new posts btw]..
wishin you wicked-lovely hours misters,
~d
I truly appreciate that you see beauty in the shadows, dear poet of kindred mindspace..
..keeps us sharing works from within.. [luvin ur new posts btw]..
wishin you wicked-lovely hours misters,
~d
Re. Convictions Reign
14th Nov 2015 5:30am
Wow. Noce conveyance of darkness withing the piece...truly.talented...nice write
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Re. Convictions Reign
Muddled from too much rhyme :(
Not sure if daydream is supposed to be plural, so I figured I'd mention...
Not sure if daydream is supposed to be plural, so I figured I'd mention...
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Re. Convictions Reign
19th Nov 2015 3:00pm
hewo sister mine. mwahs & hugglets to you [for the missin's of my favorite sigh]
*
first three lines stole my breath, pure wonder of incense smoke swirls to ashes of dragons blood cradled in coal scarred burners. gorgeousness...
"My sorrow leaks as darkest rain,
most greedy bleed of warming waves
disguising hurtful silence lain.
Grasping at mantra, myth and name,
-convictions of a worthy pain-
through memories and blushing stains.."
^^^^^
*smirks* smartypanties there.
... tastes like melancholy. love the wanderings & wonderings of your mind
loves you stacks miss sis
xoxox
*
first three lines stole my breath, pure wonder of incense smoke swirls to ashes of dragons blood cradled in coal scarred burners. gorgeousness...
"My sorrow leaks as darkest rain,
most greedy bleed of warming waves
disguising hurtful silence lain.
Grasping at mantra, myth and name,
-convictions of a worthy pain-
through memories and blushing stains.."
^^^^^
*smirks* smartypanties there.
... tastes like melancholy. love the wanderings & wonderings of your mind
loves you stacks miss sis
xoxox
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