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Southern Hospitality
Scarlet entertains gentlemen callers
Blanche prefers the golden boys
Studs newly arrived from the coast
But these ladies are known to be easy
Not resting overmuch on formality
Still Scarlet kneels to a local dandy
Her manners slipping as she gives him head
While Blanche demands some level of respect
The tribute of a well-trained tongue
Devoted to polishing her pearl
They have the pedigree to be selective
Dismissing the feebler beaus
Retaining the high performers
The ones who quite frankly give a fuck
Their carriages arriving on a sultry afternoon.
Blanche prefers the golden boys
Studs newly arrived from the coast
But these ladies are known to be easy
Not resting overmuch on formality
Still Scarlet kneels to a local dandy
Her manners slipping as she gives him head
While Blanche demands some level of respect
The tribute of a well-trained tongue
Devoted to polishing her pearl
They have the pedigree to be selective
Dismissing the feebler beaus
Retaining the high performers
The ones who quite frankly give a fuck
Their carriages arriving on a sultry afternoon.
Published 9th Nov 2015
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9th Nov 2015 5:47pm
9th Nov 2015 6:44pm
Interesting take on GWTW. I like the subtle reference to the "Frankly my dear..." line in your passage:
"Retaining the high performers
The ones who quite frankly give a fuck"
Bravo!
"Retaining the high performers
The ones who quite frankly give a fuck"
Bravo!
9th Nov 2015 10:08pm
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9th Nov 2015 11:53pm
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10th Nov 2015 2:21am
Vintage entertainment! Sassy and sexy southern bells, nicely inked! - blue angel
10th Nov 2015 3:00am
...being that I'm a southerner, this one is truly a sexy little gem... :)
This song goes great with this ink...... https://youtu.be/QwYgTlew-pA
This song goes great with this ink...... https://youtu.be/QwYgTlew-pA
10th Nov 2015 5:39am
We southern of birth will all get x[xx] dark giggle with this T2.. I adore your word play of gentle southern kneelin..
as you seem to know what they say in the south kills boredom-- lovins!! ;)
"The ones who quite frankly give a fuck".. Rhett & Scarlett novellas rule! this line shud be in one.. *clever Crow!
"Their carriages arriving on a sultry afternoon."
~classy end with all sexy before it wrapped secret-sultry-like inside..
I'm glad to see this.. your wit and characters are stellar, yet I shall never look at Blanche the same again!
[will be peering closer this time, yes sirs.. but I *had suspected!] lol.
enjoyed the easy grin with which you laid this one..
much luvz
~T
as you seem to know what they say in the south kills boredom-- lovins!! ;)
"The ones who quite frankly give a fuck".. Rhett & Scarlett novellas rule! this line shud be in one.. *clever Crow!
"Their carriages arriving on a sultry afternoon."
~classy end with all sexy before it wrapped secret-sultry-like inside..
I'm glad to see this.. your wit and characters are stellar, yet I shall never look at Blanche the same again!
[will be peering closer this time, yes sirs.. but I *had suspected!] lol.
enjoyed the easy grin with which you laid this one..
much luvz
~T
10th Nov 2015 8:29am
10th Nov 2015 12:34pm
Frankly mih dear Thomas, i give a fuck....! Loved that..love this.
Scarlets pouty lil mouth with a gentlemans cock in it..
Careful, insisting he have manners and lay down his coat...wouldnt wanna get those white knees dirty..
And then a fight ensues: who gets to lick the cum off her dainty figertips?
And Ms Dubois, Cougars it upfuck with an 18 year old (hey its legal) dude of her dreams. Her crazy chatter leaving him in screams...
BLANCHE!!!! SCARLET!!!!
Eat em up like grits and busquits gal!!!
Love and your faithful friend
Jennifer
Scarlets pouty lil mouth with a gentlemans cock in it..
Careful, insisting he have manners and lay down his coat...wouldnt wanna get those white knees dirty..
And then a fight ensues: who gets to lick the cum off her dainty figertips?
And Ms Dubois, Cougars it upfuck with an 18 year old (hey its legal) dude of her dreams. Her crazy chatter leaving him in screams...
BLANCHE!!!! SCARLET!!!!
Eat em up like grits and busquits gal!!!
Love and your faithful friend
Jennifer
13th Nov 2015 8:36am
I enjoyed as whole, but this verse
alone took it to another level:
"Her manners slipping as she gives him head
While Blanche demands some level of respect "
Wow, you got me with that wow..
have been missed crowfly.
-Howlings
alone took it to another level:
"Her manners slipping as she gives him head
While Blanche demands some level of respect "
Wow, you got me with that wow..
have been missed crowfly.
-Howlings
17th Nov 2015 8:29pm
