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knock knock
I hear the knocks, the taps, and scratching
Of something in the darkness hatching
I listen to its rasps and hisses
With needle teeth and promised kisses
My door was shut and now its not
Reminding me of fear forgot
It's in my room now, it's in here with me
It's darker somehow, the black is shifty
I cover up and hold on tight
Oh my god I wish for light
Drawing near I hear it wheezing
Gripped with fear my tears are freezing
It's bearing down and closing in
Says I'm your friend, just let me in
Should I believe and loose my grip
Let go of me, just let it slip
Into my mind, surrender choice
To its design, its sticky voice
Face to face now, with a blanket veil
We end the chase now, I end my tale
I let it in and let it be
I let it win, now it is me
Death of soul, I've given birth
Now once again, he walks the earth.
Of something in the darkness hatching
I listen to its rasps and hisses
With needle teeth and promised kisses
My door was shut and now its not
Reminding me of fear forgot
It's in my room now, it's in here with me
It's darker somehow, the black is shifty
I cover up and hold on tight
Oh my god I wish for light
Drawing near I hear it wheezing
Gripped with fear my tears are freezing
It's bearing down and closing in
Says I'm your friend, just let me in
Should I believe and loose my grip
Let go of me, just let it slip
Into my mind, surrender choice
To its design, its sticky voice
Face to face now, with a blanket veil
We end the chase now, I end my tale
I let it in and let it be
I let it win, now it is me
Death of soul, I've given birth
Now once again, he walks the earth.
Published 27th Oct 2015
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27th Oct 2015 9:37pm
27th Oct 2015 9:39pm
This really sucks the reader into it...enjoyed reading it very much so..
Hearing it wheezing....."shivers"
Awesome ink Saint!!
Hearing it wheezing....."shivers"
Awesome ink Saint!!
27th Oct 2015 10:22pm
27th Oct 2015 11:12pm
28th Oct 2015 1:51am
28th Oct 2015 3:24pm
really felt this Gregory deeply dark..
love the ending..
"We end the chase now, I end my tale
I let it in and let it be
I let it win, now it is me
Death of soul, I've given birth
Now once again, he walks the earth."
wow blows me away..
with respect Crimsin
love the ending..
"We end the chase now, I end my tale
I let it in and let it be
I let it win, now it is me
Death of soul, I've given birth
Now once again, he walks the earth."
wow blows me away..
with respect Crimsin
29th Oct 2015 6:03am
This is my part...
It's in my room now, it's in here with me
It's darker somehow, the black is shifty
I cover up and hold on tight
Oh my god I wish for light
This part reminds me of my childhood.
Great work!
It's in my room now, it's in here with me
It's darker somehow, the black is shifty
I cover up and hold on tight
Oh my god I wish for light
This part reminds me of my childhood.
Great work!
29th Oct 2015 6:57am
29th Oct 2015 9:11pm
30th Oct 2015 00:03am
a true poet a true saint a inker with a strong ablity to push the limits. i love this poem very much your awesome poet knock knock
15th Feb 2018 11:37pm
17th Feb 2018 8:56pm
Though not much on dark poems,
this one did get and keep my attention.
Somewhat for the subject matter.
but more so for the expression,
choice wording, and rhyme.
A nicely composed piece,
complete with goosebumps.
Well done, poet.
this one did get and keep my attention.
Somewhat for the subject matter.
but more so for the expression,
choice wording, and rhyme.
A nicely composed piece,
complete with goosebumps.
Well done, poet.
