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It's Been Awhile
My sheets haven't been dirty in awhile,
I have not hidden the strength of his
hands in my hair, it's been too long
It's been awhile since I was his
midnight snack, his leftover morsel
before his morning coffee
My thighs haven't been bitten in awhile,
He hasn't submerged himself in my
curtain, it's been too long
I have not hidden the strength of his
hands in my hair, it's been too long
It's been awhile since I was his
midnight snack, his leftover morsel
before his morning coffee
My thighs haven't been bitten in awhile,
He hasn't submerged himself in my
curtain, it's been too long
Published 26th Oct 2015
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26th Oct 2015 7:31pm
It has definitely been too long since I've experienced the pure pleasure of reading your words. This piece illustrates so well unrequited desire. Brava Tommie!
27th Oct 2015 12:51pm
Anonymous
26th Oct 2015 8:12pm
Tommie Lynn,
It has been too long since lustful lines like, "My thighs haven't been bitten in awhile" have graced these pages.
tornado
It has been too long since lustful lines like, "My thighs haven't been bitten in awhile" have graced these pages.
tornado
27th Oct 2015 12:52pm
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26th Oct 2015 8:57pm
Love this erotic longing. It has a playful tone in some lines but there's also sadness, missing those bites. And I've been missing you, Tommie! It's been awhile....
27th Oct 2015 12:55pm
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26th Oct 2015 10:07pm
Welcome back, you've been missed - and I'm sure you have stories to tell.
27th Oct 2015 12:56pm
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