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Sea of Ecstasy
on my finger she melts
soft satin smelts
as careful kisses pelt
where her stockings tore
pockets of pastry pond pour
where it was dripping before
a strobing poem
when candles blown
by soft moans
that waft like exotic feathers
to my mind where they tether
in my cells forever
I dip my oar
row offshore
heading for
the Sea of Ecstasy...
soft satin smelts
as careful kisses pelt
where her stockings tore
pockets of pastry pond pour
where it was dripping before
a strobing poem
when candles blown
by soft moans
that waft like exotic feathers
to my mind where they tether
in my cells forever
I dip my oar
row offshore
heading for
the Sea of Ecstasy...
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Re. Sea of Ecstasy
24th Oct 2015 6:07pm
sailing those erotic waters todays I see Dean ;)
so beautifully written..
love Crim
so beautifully written..
love Crim
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Re. Sea of Ecstasy
24th Oct 2015 6:36pm
thanx Crim, it's a ocean i love to traverse, i dont chase too many waterfalls...
Re. Sea of Ecstasy
24th Oct 2015 6:55pm
I really enjoyed the launch of your
voyage. I hope the rest of the trip is a good as the beginning.
Keith
voyage. I hope the rest of the trip is a good as the beginning.
Keith
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Re: Re. Sea of Ecstasy
27th Oct 2015 6:52pm
Re. Sea of Ecstasy
Anonymous
24th Oct 2015 7:38pm
Oh yeah,, dipping that oar, now that's a good thing.
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27th Oct 2015 6:54pm
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Re. Sea of Ecstasy
25th Oct 2015 11:22pm
Steam in the waters and I love your comment to poet Crim. That's the perfect response.
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Re. Sea of Ecstasy
26th Oct 2015 2:50am
I think you’ve ruffled my ‘exotic feathers’ with this sexy ink. In a good way of course….
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27th Oct 2015 7:05pm