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put the sandwich back in the fridge...
it was around midnight
when I realised that she
probably wasn't coming
to lunch after all...
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Re. put the sandwich back in the fridge...
21st Oct 2015 11:46pm
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22nd Oct 2015 00:08am
Re. put the sandwich back in the fridge...
21st Oct 2015 11:48pm
Good write- very minimalist, but good story. Reminds me of Hemingway's six word story.
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Re: Re. put the sandwich back in the fridge...
22nd Oct 2015 00:12am
Re. put the sandwich back in the fridge...
21st Oct 2015 11:51pm
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22nd Oct 2015 00:16am
Re. put the sandwich back in the fridge...
22nd Oct 2015 4:24am
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22nd Oct 2015 11:46pm
he who lives by the sandwich
dies by the sandwich and
I'll take that sandwich with me
to my grave...
I'm beginning to think that maybe
she sees herself as being
a bit above a sandwich...
well not until
it's six foot under
with me in my coffin she ain't..:)
dies by the sandwich and
I'll take that sandwich with me
to my grave...
I'm beginning to think that maybe
she sees herself as being
a bit above a sandwich...
well not until
it's six foot under
with me in my coffin she ain't..:)
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22nd Oct 2015 11:50pm
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22nd Oct 2015 4:11pm
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22nd Oct 2015 11:53pm
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23rd Oct 2015 00:16am
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23rd Oct 2015 00:29am
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23rd Oct 2015 5:08pm
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23rd Oct 2015 11:03pm