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Love to hate you
I love to hate you..
When you grab my hair
And, I bite your chest
Then you slap my face
And, I put my hand
Around your throat
I love to hate you
When you scream
At me all the dirty
Names except
My own..
And, I cut you off with
A kiss
Then you throw me
Down on the bed
And, make me
Come instead
Then I forget
I ever hated
You at all...
Until the next time
You want
to love me...
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Re. Love to hate you
17th Oct 2015 9:17am
Yowza..love some choking and hair pulling too but im sorry bout this darlin.
Sucks having hate in the bedroom. Submission is about love total trust and respect..the rest all exiting fun and RP..the essentials for a great bdsm relationship. Then you can open up and enjoy the rest.
Jennifer
Sucks having hate in the bedroom. Submission is about love total trust and respect..the rest all exiting fun and RP..the essentials for a great bdsm relationship. Then you can open up and enjoy the rest.
Jennifer
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17th Oct 2015 9:21am
This isn't about a D/s relationship it's Just about two people that hate each other having sex lol
Re. Love to hate you
Anonymous
17th Oct 2015 3:37pm
Kickass poetry, Phaedra_Farrow, each line was gripping and very much in your face. I felt each and every emotion. Been there. Done that.
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Re. Love to hate you
17th Oct 2015 7:46pm
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17th Oct 2015 10:05pm
Re. Love to hate you
17th Oct 2015 8:39pm
Amazing tension... very sexy! Sometimes our vaginas have a mind of their own... craving people who aren't good for us at all, but it's damn glorious when we let them have their way! ;)
The "And, " that started some of your lines interrupted your flow and I think it would read better without it.
The "And, " that started some of your lines interrupted your flow and I think it would read better without it.
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Re: Re. Love to hate you
17th Oct 2015 10:04pm
Thank you for the input. Sometimes I'm not very Good at flowing things together. I may try to do an edit later.
Re. Love to hate you
18th Oct 2015 1:06am
Phaedra, this packs a mighty sexual force. Truly awesome in its dark side of sex. Finely penned too.
John
John
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18th Oct 2015 2:42am
Re. Love to hate you
18th Oct 2015 7:00am
Wow! Ultra cool piece without all the cliches ... It's not overplayed which makes it ring true. Wonderful.
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Re. Love to hate you
18th Oct 2015 7:05am
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20th Oct 2015 1:57am