Demoness

Wow. This is total evil incarnate. I bow, envious of your skill. Your pen cuts cleaner than the sharpest scalpel.

thank you Lord Hades a better response I couldn't hope for bows to you in respect..

with love Crimsin

it's a bountiful feast for the very wicked.
you're the Dark Lady of outrageous orgies...

thank you John for such a great comment :)

with love Crim

Well that FED me! The moan was quite vocal too. ;)

I felt like screaming I do that, I do that, as I indulged deeper into this.

I also have the ones, whose names light up my updates, and then I click the links... and... well... Thank Heavens I'm single!
You are quite right, y'know...
"they wiggle and squirm like a parasite
wrapping around your cerebellum  " they do.

and "hungry for your dark verse "

Totally love this, my Crim, it is masterful and lovely, in the depths of it's darkness there is the refreshing truth that lingers.

Love@ YOU!

thank you Al for showing me so much love on this write you made my day :)

love Crim

Crimsin you demonic enchantress your dark word have pumped new blood into my black hart. every word of this poem is absolutely inspired by the darkness in you.(sucking your essence for inspiration you are a feast for the beast in me succubus from hell inking out my insanity) my favorite part.

thank you DP for such a heart touching comment on this dark ink :)

love Crim

 
"chained to the netherworld
we are one in the abyss
united front of depravity
letting our darkness shine "       this part especially spoke to me.   Shining darkness,and depraved minds are  something that I relate to a great deal.  

You certainly have a way with words,  and this piece is nothing short of stunning.  Thanks for sharing.  

thank you lovely lady for such a fantastic comment :)

with love Crim

How could you paint such an imagery with just words without boring the reader ...  ?

thank you Dejure for being entertained by this dark write :)

love Crim

I love this ^_^

thank you Kavik you always make me smile :)

love Brenda

Oh lawdy lady Crim..bow to your this and your wicked woman ways!
I love when you get down and dirtty with deeezire and spit fire...you are one too!

 
Master of all that is obscene  
turns me on with his deep evil ink
wanting to suck his black blood
with my vampiric hunger

Big godsmackeD shit eatin grin ohn these lips!

I let out one last torturous moan
am but meat for the beast
eat from this black table
feast and feed your disease

Huge hungry cheer! Thankin nasty ways you would you get that yummy tummy filled full...loved bren
.
Love
Jennifer

beautiful Jennifer love your response to this dark ink.. put a big smile on my face thank you lovely lady :)

love Brenda

The cum-sucking demoness is hot! Send her down my dark corners. I will be drained and spent and probably spit out in the alley, but I think it would be worth it. Great write, Crim!

thank you DPW for showing love to this lusty dark write :)

love Crim

Damn! I always have to make sure not to read you before a meeting . It's so hot in these clothes......lol

You are incredible!
Love the image

thank you Lean happy to know this turned up the heat for you :)

love Crim

You paint a wicked feast, Dear Crim, enjoy sucking his poetic quill. Always delicious when written in darkness. - blue angel

thank you beautiful Angel for such a lovely comment :)

with love Crim

tiny gods, yes! this is such dark sensuality as only you can deliver...
... if you ever try your hand at a pnr novel, i'm totally down for beta reading; you'd rock that shite!
loved this, beautiful one
xoxox

thank you beautiful Katja I love reading demonic romance though I don't ever think I would ever be ambitious enough to try one myself.. love your comment lovely one :)

love Brenda

thank you beautiful one for putting such a big smile on my face with your comments..

I love you :)

xoxoxo Brenda

Makes me want to be sacrificed upon your altar my demonic Lady Crim.

"chained to the netherworld
we are one in the abyss
united front of depravity
letting our darkness shine"

Your lines are exhilarating!  "Demoness" is a battle cry, a call to writing and a seduction.  One of your best and into the list.  I'll have to replenish my black blood....  

thank you Sir Crow for showing love for this dark ink making me smile wide :)

love Crim

Damn, Brenda.. love the raw, in your face aggression of this write.. masterfully penned as always.. into my list it goes... with love..




Dave

thank you Dave for showing me love on this dark ink :)

love Brenda

a dark diamond, you have amazing images...

thank you Dean for such a fantastic comment :)

love Crim

Whoa jimmanee cricket! Will ya look
at this sick spit!? Holy cripes this was even darker than the last one!! lol but I loved every word my dear! Whew.... Lol

thank you Poe I cherish your thoughts and visits :)

love Crim

I just love reading your poetry 😁
I can hear your voice in every line.
Maybe that's why it's so good and special 😀

thank you DC for showing me so much love on my ink :)

love Crim

This ink has so much dark beauty to it, Crim.
A folkloric vibe, a gothic feel, a devilish love. I especially enjoyed ;

"chained to the netherworld
we are one in the abyss
united front of depravity
letting our darkness shine"  This is a grand piece of art sweety....

thank you lovely Rain for calling my dark ink art that really touched my soul :)

love Crim

wow the imagery in this piece is so dark and amazing... excellent wick'd ink crim

thank you graciously Magic :)

love Crim

I loved it.  Great job!  Very wicked.

thank you kindly lovely lady :)

with love Crim

I just love how you are the only one that has the skill to make me enjoy this genre of poetry - you are so, so good :-)

thank you most graciously David for a great compliment :)

love Crim