Female Dark

what a beautiful write I love this DPW :)

with love Crim

Thank you Crim. Love that you read my stuff!

Never wake her 'til the time is right.  If she wants to sleep in then indulge her.  I particularly like how you portray the female dark as a possible part of your own psyche, not a separate entity:

"She sleeps in me
Through the early morning
Till the sun rises high"

And she has restorative properties:

"Yet there is something to be learned
Of the slumber I have manifested
Something that needs healing
Resolution of a troubled cause"

Then the healing comes with rest, and

" ...her eyes shall open
In their own accord"

Given world enough, and time.  Excellent write for a Sunday morning DPW!  

It's nice you are perceptive enough to see that it was my own psyche personifying the female here. And you are right on all counts down the line. It was a nice Sunday write. Thank you Crow. Always love your insights.

*Masterful*.. rubs my mind at first read.. then, I read it again.. even moreso on second
devouring. the softer emotions of precarious advancement despite enthrall to wake, mix in
heady doses with your [self]command, making.. breath-stealing gorgeous!

"It instills me to wake her up" ..lovely favored verse, major darlins.. portraying gentle patience
beyond desire to merge ..

"So I allow her the comforts of rest
And her eyes shall open
In their own accord"
~you evoke poetry sighs easily here.. tender awareness equals sighs every time.

This is simply stunning in ideal and smooth cascade. to delve so deeply into inner connections is
a blessing to those that do, both solace and soft smile pour from within and last line is perfect!
this said, will go with masterful And balanced, as yin and yang..
low dainty curtsies of enjoyment,
~d

Thank you Darksigh. You flatter and humble me with your praise.

The line you favored I was skeptical about it. I was unsure if it was what I meant. And yet, it sounded correct at the same time. I am glad it proved favorable.

You found the flow and the quietness in this one, Dark. I appreciate that.

Sir Play. . .what a beautiful and serene "longing". . .*sigh*. . .xo, Devlin;)

Dev,

Thank you. "serene longing" is exactly what this is. I always appreciate your input and feedback.

This is a piece to be alone in silence,
then by hands bring it to one's heart
beating just to lette the it leap from
the page, so that the words may
roam & have their way.

A beautiful fondling of the soul you
have for us here, written thru the
form of letters.. Unconfined space,
where time isn't noticeable,
un'existing.. .


Lovely airs..

-Howlings

Your words are equally comforting. The feeling of no boundaries of space or time, but to allow things take their course. A meditation of sorts is what I felt writing this.

Thank you for your comments.

dawn evolving slowly from the absolute darkness.
it's a peaceable awakening...

Thank you again JF for your comment. The sun nor moon does not hurry to light the night.

Wow!  This is such a beautiful collection of words!  Definitely following you

Appreciate the comment and read. Glad you joined my team. Haha. I got your back covered as well. Thank you.

To me this is a masterpiece, beautifully written!
I'm gonna follow you ;-)