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'Pocket'
...Tight,
dark...
confining
a
quieted
stillness,
that
screams...
yet,
turning
from
the inside
out...
changes
nothing...
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Re. 'Pocket'
4th Oct 2015 10:13am
I love your thought path here dearest..
many things spring to mind at title & I sighed out a lil darkness at the read..
mood evoking piece, I likes..
and... ??... tuck in the pocket!! lol ;)
hughug
~d
many things spring to mind at title & I sighed out a lil darkness at the read..
mood evoking piece, I likes..
and... ??... tuck in the pocket!! lol ;)
hughug
~d
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4th Oct 2015 10:53am
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4th Oct 2015 4:46pm
You have me thinking here Poe. Very interesting and kinda sexy still ; )
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5th Oct 2015 9:10am
Aaaawwww well thinking is always a good thing in poetry right? lol
Ur the best my sweetheart, thank u! :)
Ur the best my sweetheart, thank u! :)
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Anonymous
5th Oct 2015 4:21am
Thought provoking and haunting are the two words that come to my mind. . .Need to rethink those pockets, inside and out. . .Devlin;)
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5th Oct 2015 9:12am
Hi there! What a sweet surprise having
a new visitor! I'm honored n thank u greatly, will return the favor soon :)
a new visitor! I'm honored n thank u greatly, will return the favor soon :)
Re. 'Pocket'
5th Oct 2015 2:42pm
Neatly tucked. I tend to do so quiet a lot. changes nothing.
I loves this piece. Admittedly... I enjoy this type of piece.
Darker.
I loves this piece. Admittedly... I enjoy this type of piece.
Darker.
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5th Oct 2015 8:56pm
My sweetheart you just put a big smile
on my face :) truly n always appreciate you :)
on my face :) truly n always appreciate you :)
Re. 'Pocket'
6th Oct 2015 4:05am
Deep Dark Scribe Poetik..love the ending and the title...very fitting with the flow and structure of this poem.. pocket makes me think of still silence that follows screams..that void, empty space..waiting wanting to be filled.. this also somehow made me think of this line from the Glass Menagerie "Yes, I have tricks in my pocket, I have things up my sleeve. But I am the opposite of a stage magician. He gives you illusion that has the appearance of truth. I give you truth in the pleasant disguise of illusion." the whole reveal/conceal aspect...is what the "inside out" pline brings to mind..anyrate cant quite put my finger on this one and truthfully thats what i loved most about it..intriguing scribe ..i enjoyed immensely
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6th Oct 2015 10:25am
And I enjoyed your deep mind probing
of this n thd movie reference too! lol
Truly, this n a good many I have done
the clear intention NOT being seen?
It's WHAT I love most becuz then I get to muse over the many views readers
have on what they read. :) big thanks
my dear, always n forever grateful :)
of this n thd movie reference too! lol
Truly, this n a good many I have done
the clear intention NOT being seen?
It's WHAT I love most becuz then I get to muse over the many views readers
have on what they read. :) big thanks
my dear, always n forever grateful :)
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1st Nov 2015 2:08pm
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1st Nov 2015 2:19pm
Aaaawwww... Ur as sweet as a chocolate candy bar! :) thank u, I'm hugely flattered :)