Bars

Is there anything better ?

Hardcore Like

I've never had a hardcore like before and I'll treasure it, Speak. Is there anything better :-)?

Thank you!!!

Sounds a bit creepy, doesn't it? That's what feelings are. Creepy ...
Love your comments, Gabriel!

Enigmatic title that draws the reader, wondering if it is about 'prison' bars or drinking bars!

That's why I chose it :-). To allure all the secret drinkers to have a sip of my haiku :-)!
Thanks, Solomon!

forget the heart -
be a liver...!!!

As the liver deals
much better with what toxics
it is fed
I thank you very much for your wise advice, Paul :-).

Miss Chi, I love this piece! If it's authentic love then it would be a prison from which I would desire no escape. Brava1

Even if  it's true love, a prison it is nonetheless when surrounded by walls and bars, Gahddess_Worship.  
Not to have an escape route is the worst I can imagine.  
But I'm glad that you can make something better of my haiku! Thank you so much for giving us a more peaceful alternative!

it's a familiar & crowded prison. nice work, Chi...

Feelings seep through bars and walls.
A continuous toxic and contagious stream ...Thanks, John.

If love is like "clawing at the walls and bars", I wonder how hate feels?. . .Loved this, Miss Chi. . .xo, Devlin;)

It doesn't need hate, the clawing... I'd call it the need for fresh air :-)!
Glad you shared your opinion on that, Devlin! Much appreciated! xo

You just killed this my dear! Everytime you put pen to paper, you excel... :)

Poe, I'm always glad about your lovely words. You have a way with them, you know...