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Succubus The Seductress From Hell
succubus meat
sleeping cock
a feast for the hell bitch
cunt splayed
demonic horde
licking her gash
as she rides the night air
with midnight wings
seductress of the innocent
they taste better fresh
corrupt flesh is bitter
licking the cocks of the sheep
as they sleep comfy in their beds
she pounces and rides you
like all hell is on her tail
sending her slithering tendrils
deep into your soul
feasting off the essence of her victims
then legion comes in
fucking your soul's ass
while sucking your cock
in fear you lie in your bed petrified
and beguiled by this demonic whore
on top of you
she is fucking and sucking
the life from you
but you must ride to the end
the torture too great in agony you writhe and moan
finally ready to explode she gives you a wicked grin
as she drinks the last drop of life from you
(Pic found by the beautiful Taryn)
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Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 4:01am
Most people don't have keys to someone's heart but you, my dear, have skeleton key to a man's drawers. Nice ink and pic.
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30th Sep 2015 6:26am
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 4:19am
This is wickedly good! In the South we'd say "the hag" rode me last night to explain the phenomena that happens while sleeping, and I literally pictured an old gnarled gray haired wench with fangs sucking the life out of me ...
... I wish I'd seen your picture offered here yeeeears ago, I'd have slept better as a teen.
Sweet evil ink!
... I wish I'd seen your picture offered here yeeeears ago, I'd have slept better as a teen.
Sweet evil ink!
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30th Sep 2015 6:27am
thank you LSP for a great comment :)
the pic was provided by the lovely Taryn..
succubus can be quite seductive ;)
with love Crim
the pic was provided by the lovely Taryn..
succubus can be quite seductive ;)
with love Crim
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 4:31am
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30th Sep 2015 6:29am
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 4:34am
*in squeeeak!..to see you're dark siphoning Succubus by dream has me excited Brenda!
sexy seductive and drippy.. mwah mwah*
"sending her slithering tendrils
deep into your soul
feasting off the essence of her victims"
luv this most.. you've stroked my mind w/wicked wet fingertips darlin..
"she is fucking and sucking
the life from you
but you must ride to the end"
~more dark hot drippies..
I am a'fever & missed your inks, dark creamy ladyluv.. bowing always!
~d
sexy seductive and drippy.. mwah mwah*
"sending her slithering tendrils
deep into your soul
feasting off the essence of her victims"
luv this most.. you've stroked my mind w/wicked wet fingertips darlin..
"she is fucking and sucking
the life from you
but you must ride to the end"
~more dark hot drippies..
I am a'fever & missed your inks, dark creamy ladyluv.. bowing always!
~d
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Re: Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 6:30am
lovely d~ so fantastic to see you on my pages big smiles on my face :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 4:49am
Helk bitch ride in extreme.
Evil in evrery bed spring.
Very strong images.
A lot of succubus popping up down here. Already started my lillith succubus, lol sorry not copying you when you see it.
Grea t job Brenda. Really enjoyed!
🌹Jennifer
Evil in evrery bed spring.
Very strong images.
A lot of succubus popping up down here. Already started my lillith succubus, lol sorry not copying you when you see it.
Grea t job Brenda. Really enjoyed!
🌹Jennifer
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Re: Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 6:32am
thank you beautiful Jennifer I've been under Lilith's spell from some time now..
I think we're all bewitched by the recent Blood Moon ;)
love Brenda
I think we're all bewitched by the recent Blood Moon ;)
love Brenda
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2015 5:56am
I mean, yeah, like yes, totally, well done, noted, mentally registered with this piece, your imagery nice, I don't know exactly what to write because I'm still processing lol.
Nicely done
SW
Nicely done
SW
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30th Sep 2015 6:33am
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30th Sep 2015 6:57am
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30th Sep 2015 8:42pm
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30th Sep 2015 8:14am
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Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 4:01pm
goddamn that was hot and I don't even have a dick... lady boner problems :P enjoyed the read
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Re: Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 8:44pm
giggling at the lady boner thank you Kitty for making me smile :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 5:27pm
"sending her slithering tendrils
deep into your soul
feasting off the essence of her victims" - Sin-sational ink. Seduction of the highest order. Corrupting sweetly, blue angel
deep into your soul
feasting off the essence of her victims" - Sin-sational ink. Seduction of the highest order. Corrupting sweetly, blue angel
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30th Sep 2015 8:46pm
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Re: Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 8:48pm
thank you beautiful one from my heart for the love you've shown me and this write :)
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2015 7:12pm
Strong and Raw. . .very Crim[son] like. . .xo, Devlin;)
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30th Sep 2015 8:49pm
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2015 7:22pm
Damn, Brenda.. lusciously wicked.. steaming hot in here.. very well written.. big fan.. into the list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 8:49pm
thank you Dave for putting a big smile on my face with your comments :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 7:33pm
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30th Sep 2015 8:51pm
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30th Sep 2015 7:55pm
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30th Sep 2015 8:51pm
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 8:35pm
But isn't that counterproductive? I hope she doesn't swallow those last drops of life and then demand further satisfaction! In any case, I'm going to have to don my sheep's clothing to lure her to my lair. Then we'll see what happens when a succubus meets an incubus. All kinds of fun! Loved this Seductress Crim!
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Re: Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 8:53pm
made me giggle with wicked delight Sir Crow at the meeting of you the incubus thank you ;)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
30th Sep 2015 10:42pm
Lovely Crimsin, you are definitely on fire. Have been enjoying one after another; you are spoiling us.
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1st Oct 2015 8:24pm
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
Wow Crim!! Love it...leaves a very good image in my wicked mind ;)...
Hell of a sexy write Crim!!!!!
Hell of a sexy write Crim!!!!!
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1st Oct 2015 8:25pm
Re. Succubus The Seductress From Hell
4th Oct 2015 4:54pm
A really visceral write full of cum and vinegar. I suspect one needs to hang garlic from their cock to swear off the vampires from sucking off that last drop of life. However dead one wakes up, you were certainly alive when writing this. Great work Crim!
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5th Oct 2015 7:08am