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Cry, Sigh...Desire
...And so
Another day dawns
as he slips away...
Into a mind-gone
afar into dreams sway
How does desire
make him truly feel?
what would her touch
skin to skin reveal?
What does the face
of reality see?
is it mutually elusive
this... 'love's proclivity?'
A desire to kiss her lips
a desire to hold her bliss...
folded into the grasp of hands
emboldened, by
passions' inherent demands...
Her eyes, a wonder, he'll
wander to get beyond her
inhibitions, saunter through
her tenuous tendencies of
vivacious admissions...
So many routes ponderin'
along dreams about...her
and those achingly pressing
surges...
When such desirings occur...
*Ok, so I dream wwaaayyy
too much! soooo!?? shoot me!
lol nah actually that'll hurt! lol*
Another day dawns
as he slips away...
Into a mind-gone
afar into dreams sway
How does desire
make him truly feel?
what would her touch
skin to skin reveal?
What does the face
of reality see?
is it mutually elusive
this... 'love's proclivity?'
A desire to kiss her lips
a desire to hold her bliss...
folded into the grasp of hands
emboldened, by
passions' inherent demands...
Her eyes, a wonder, he'll
wander to get beyond her
inhibitions, saunter through
her tenuous tendencies of
vivacious admissions...
So many routes ponderin'
along dreams about...her
and those achingly pressing
surges...
When such desirings occur...
*Ok, so I dream wwaaayyy
too much! soooo!?? shoot me!
lol nah actually that'll hurt! lol*
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Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
29th Sep 2015 12:04pm
Po, you are quite the talented young man. The pieces you throw down, always superb. Mature feeling to your work, and a master of rhyme and rhythm. Really exellent piece.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
29th Sep 2015 1:49pm
Gosh ur sooooo sweet my dear! Thank you so much, muah! appreciate u always :)
Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
29th Sep 2015 1:30pm
Poe I'm a dreamer too can relate to this write on many levels beautiful inking..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
29th Sep 2015 1:51pm
You're wonderful praise gives me a big smile Crim, thanks a bunch! :) grateful for your support always :)
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
30th Sep 2015 10:18am
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Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
30th Sep 2015 10:23am
"So many routes ponderin'
along dreams about...her
and those achingly pressing
surges... "
~u shud know any ponderin' gets poetry-fondlin' comment m'dearest..;)
ever you, slingin' wicked vernacular! .. enjoyed your pensive smooth lines of awwwe..
soft desire is boldly becoming to your inks & like seein it! great title too misters..
shiny sweet nite to u,
~d
along dreams about...her
and those achingly pressing
surges... "
~u shud know any ponderin' gets poetry-fondlin' comment m'dearest..;)
ever you, slingin' wicked vernacular! .. enjoyed your pensive smooth lines of awwwe..
soft desire is boldly becoming to your inks & like seein it! great title too misters..
shiny sweet nite to u,
~d
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
30th Sep 2015 1:50pm
Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
30th Sep 2015 8:20pm
I dig your cool balance of passion infused with the right amount of humor... Not every writer could pull that off. But you did & then some... Nice!
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
30th Sep 2015 9:35pm
Thank you so much "Mr. Super Observant" lol...truly, I feel blessed to have your brothership, n continued support! :)
Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
1st Oct 2015 1:45pm
Wow this was Simply Beautiful!!! love the tender tone and the light, ethereal feel ...at least thats what i get from words "dawn" and "desire" ...dreamy ink Poetik
fav lines:
"Her eyes, a wonder, he'll
wander to get beyond her
inhibitions"
fav lines:
"Her eyes, a wonder, he'll
wander to get beyond her
inhibitions"
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
4th Oct 2015 9:17am
Thank you sweetie, happy you enjoyed n as always I'm grateful for your support :)
Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
2nd Oct 2015 10:27pm
"proclivity, inherent demands, tenuous tendencies" whaaaat??? what you takin bout Poe.... you sooo naughty and I LOVE it! sorry to be late to the party but i am here baby!
xoxox
Red
xoxox
Red
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
4th Oct 2015 9:19am
My mommy always said ( n still does)
" better late than never" lol soooooo u get a free pass lol thank you my sweetness :)
" better late than never" lol soooooo u get a free pass lol thank you my sweetness :)
Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
22nd Oct 2015 00:48am
Wow! You are very talented! I've been writing since I was a young girl. I love the vivid illustration and rhythm of your work!! 😉
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Re: Re. Cry, Sigh...Desire
22nd Oct 2015 9:57am
Aaaawwww your comment warmed my heart! Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it :)