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Ooooh, dig this so much sweetheart! Incendiary end, love the repition in just the right spots, sexy not trashy, all my favs. I used swirling tongues recently, newgod nurture i believe. Great minds think..puttin it on rl. But have to take one down to do it so itl b a sec.


🍑🐠J

you flatter me, jennifer, just a little something i conjured up this morning :) sounds like i have a few more of yours to read, i'll be sure to leave my thoughts with you afterwards

Whoa! You took me on a ride with this almost explicit piece of poetical writing. Sometime, many time, a poem can get its point across with subtlety . . . You did.

thank you, mr. bolton, i'm glad this one took you somewhere. i favor the "less is more" approach on occasion (:

so beautifully and tastefully erotic in love with this steamy, hot , red..

with love Crimsin

i'm glad you enjoyed, crimsin, i'll have to do some more explicit pieces to keep things balanced now.

I love the wording and erotic content, but the structure to this is particularly striking with a subsequent read.  No caps, and four sentences of increasing length.

" heat of
bodies - one atop the
other, starting fires."

A fine ending.  All the shades of red and then some.