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Darkness
My mind is bewildered, there's nothing I can see,
I don't know what to do, what has happened to me?
Happiness sucked out, bliss is far away,
Sadness remains present in this continuous day,
I desire to be happy, I have everything to be content,
But why must I be so far away from happiness's scent?
This confusion is crazy, it drives me insane!
I don't know what to do, I don't know how longer I can remain,
Am I being selfish? Asking for more than I've been provided?
But I crave not to be lost, God I feel so misguided!
Please help me Oh Great One I desire this no longer,
Give me wisdom, give me the answers, or just make me stronger,
Where did I go wrong? Where did I go astray?
I feel this influx of sadness has been destined to stay,
I yearn for help, I need help to fight!
For I fear if this carries on I'll never see the light,
I have everything I need, so what is it that I crave?
Why do I feel so lost, lost within this cave,
The cave of sadness, the cave of confusion,
Hidden from the world, within its own illusions,
It is infinite, and it consume all light,
I cannot see an exit, I have lost my might,
Escape I must, so I will endeavour,
Failure and omissions, I will not take either,
This day may take forever, but everything has its conclusions,
I will confront my fear and take its retribution,
I cannot last any longer with darkness covering my eyes,
I will find what I want! There will be no more lies?
Lies of my destination, lies of my existence,
I can take no more it is time for resistance,
I hope I achieve escaping this darkening rain,
For my mentality is threatened I must remain sane,
I will not lose faith, I will fight,
I will defeat this darkness, I will find the light...
I don't know what to do, what has happened to me?
Happiness sucked out, bliss is far away,
Sadness remains present in this continuous day,
I desire to be happy, I have everything to be content,
But why must I be so far away from happiness's scent?
This confusion is crazy, it drives me insane!
I don't know what to do, I don't know how longer I can remain,
Am I being selfish? Asking for more than I've been provided?
But I crave not to be lost, God I feel so misguided!
Please help me Oh Great One I desire this no longer,
Give me wisdom, give me the answers, or just make me stronger,
Where did I go wrong? Where did I go astray?
I feel this influx of sadness has been destined to stay,
I yearn for help, I need help to fight!
For I fear if this carries on I'll never see the light,
I have everything I need, so what is it that I crave?
Why do I feel so lost, lost within this cave,
The cave of sadness, the cave of confusion,
Hidden from the world, within its own illusions,
It is infinite, and it consume all light,
I cannot see an exit, I have lost my might,
Escape I must, so I will endeavour,
Failure and omissions, I will not take either,
This day may take forever, but everything has its conclusions,
I will confront my fear and take its retribution,
I cannot last any longer with darkness covering my eyes,
I will find what I want! There will be no more lies?
Lies of my destination, lies of my existence,
I can take no more it is time for resistance,
I hope I achieve escaping this darkening rain,
For my mentality is threatened I must remain sane,
I will not lose faith, I will fight,
I will defeat this darkness, I will find the light...
Published 12th Jun 2011
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12th Jun 2011 1:10am
I wish I cld write sumthang dat beautiful,I mean ur rhyming scheme,choice of words,emotions displayed......Wow!!!
12th Jun 2011 11:22pm
12th Jun 2011 4:12pm
Wow this is good. When I read this I feel the emotions. Your good and keep on writing!
12th Jun 2011 11:22pm
13th Jun 2011 8:01pm
truly expressive. Each poet has his own technique of course, but I feel your poetry will gain depth and beauty of expression if you can get rid of "rhyming" necessity. Just a suggestion...
13th Jun 2011 9:27pm
thanks for the suggestion, i find it easier to make it flow with rhyming but i will try something new
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13th Jun 2011 10:41pm
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