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Romance Fitzgerald
Hand burns my skin
With hot touch
Behind knee traveling up
To divinity
Sweet wet baptism
In my thighs
Before i die a rage spent
Anger and lust
Before you fade away
Shadowed in nevermore
Once young man
Turned grey
Suck nourish
From my beauty
Live through vice
And distinction
Seeks redemption
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust
Kiss lilly white
Petals areola
Try 'n tame
But my savage beast remain
Fuck you
Fitzgerald
Romancing
The party after
Make a gooood
Woman crazy
Mind travel
And such
Stretch arms
Further to catch
A past
Too far flung
Your sweet song
My darlin
Already
Been sung.
A kiss love.
(for the Zelda's of the world!)
With hot touch
Behind knee traveling up
To divinity
Sweet wet baptism
In my thighs
Before i die a rage spent
Anger and lust
Before you fade away
Shadowed in nevermore
Once young man
Turned grey
Suck nourish
From my beauty
Live through vice
And distinction
Seeks redemption
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust
Kiss lilly white
Petals areola
Try 'n tame
But my savage beast remain
Fuck you
Fitzgerald
Romancing
The party after
Make a gooood
Woman crazy
Mind travel
And such
Stretch arms
Further to catch
A past
Too far flung
Your sweet song
My darlin
Already
Been sung.
A kiss love.
(for the Zelda's of the world!)
Published 24th Sep 2015
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24th Sep 2015 8:34am
"Behind knee traveling up
To divinity "
~first.. a perfect soft spot and squeak, then praising your strong beginning w/ a vote for *goin up*
..eg, o'course!
"Fuck you
Fitzgerald "
~rofl..omfg creampuff! .. had to smirk at the 'ode by finger' that popped in my head ..;)
if only the swoon of life were ever so sweet.
"A virgin spirit" ..soul power captured at its finest from your pen.. tastes of youth.
"Stretch arms
Further to catch
A past
To far flung"
~ the yearn is so present here..you epitomize entirety w/this set & did beautiful by title..
I luv the far away feel here.. plus peeks of hot dazzle romance/promise of sexy young days
in blk'n'whte past mixing with just enuf glints of despair at the aging/changing. deep & enjoyed.
kisses & pounce [has been days!]
~d
To divinity "
~first.. a perfect soft spot and squeak, then praising your strong beginning w/ a vote for *goin up*
..eg, o'course!
"Fuck you
Fitzgerald "
~rofl..omfg creampuff! .. had to smirk at the 'ode by finger' that popped in my head ..;)
if only the swoon of life were ever so sweet.
"A virgin spirit" ..soul power captured at its finest from your pen.. tastes of youth.
"Stretch arms
Further to catch
A past
To far flung"
~ the yearn is so present here..you epitomize entirety w/this set & did beautiful by title..
I luv the far away feel here.. plus peeks of hot dazzle romance/promise of sexy young days
in blk'n'whte past mixing with just enuf glints of despair at the aging/changing. deep & enjoyed.
kisses & pounce [has been days!]
~d
24th Sep 2015 8:38am
I missssed uuuu sooooi gaaaawd daaaamn much doll. Love you
Pouncin hugs
Tugs n snorts of appreciation.
💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋
Jennifer
Pouncin hugs
Tugs n snorts of appreciation.
💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋
Jennifer
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 3:19pm
"Seeks redempt
Between my legs"
Redemption / Salvation / Many things can be found between the legs of a willing, wanton, woman. Most of all I believe the male, during climax, feels invincible, something only a woman can give him. The woman? She is the taker of this man thrust and eruption, but not merely someone who lies there and "takes." Through the licking, and caressing and fucking and sucking she swells with feminine pride knowing she is solely responsible for this man's feeling of greatness.She also understands, with just one word she can deflate him into a sniveling little boy. It is SHE who ultimately has the power.
Between my legs"
Redemption / Salvation / Many things can be found between the legs of a willing, wanton, woman. Most of all I believe the male, during climax, feels invincible, something only a woman can give him. The woman? She is the taker of this man thrust and eruption, but not merely someone who lies there and "takes." Through the licking, and caressing and fucking and sucking she swells with feminine pride knowing she is solely responsible for this man's feeling of greatness.She also understands, with just one word she can deflate him into a sniveling little boy. It is SHE who ultimately has the power.
24th Sep 2015 3:36pm
Jerry if i had a cock, i would be full errect after that! Yeah doll, fucking exactly!! Like a little bug i could smash him!!!! Lol dig u so 💙
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
24th Sep 2015 10:26pm
Hehehe......taker i of my thoughts that light,999 anywherenlense"
Certainly no
Pretense, dig whatyoir description dig hard enpough to absorb pain. Yes. See the glare off the word. Just oh so damn ummerfallout xant!
Certainly no
Pretense, dig whatyoir description dig hard enpough to absorb pain. Yes. See the glare off the word. Just oh so damn ummerfallout xant!
24th Sep 2015 3:38pm
beautiful Jennifer a fierce and lovely erotic love these lines..
"Seeks redempt
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust"
beautiful virgin spirit but knows her way in the sexual arts ;)
too many gems in this poem to quote just know I love your voice lovely lady..
the picture is perfect too..
love Brenda
"Seeks redempt
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust"
beautiful virgin spirit but knows her way in the sexual arts ;)
too many gems in this poem to quote just know I love your voice lovely lady..
the picture is perfect too..
love Brenda
24th Sep 2015 3:44pm
Thanks so Brenda, youk know, i think we can all take back our sex with that mantra, a virgin spirit, slut thrust.
Adore you doll.
💋Jennifer
Adore you doll.
💋Jennifer
24th Sep 2015 5:49pm
"Sweet wet baptism
In my thighs
Before i die a rage spent
Anger and lust"
wow your ink is hot as always... beautifully delivered Jenn :D
In my thighs
Before i die a rage spent
Anger and lust"
wow your ink is hot as always... beautifully delivered Jenn :D
24th Sep 2015 6:18pm
24th Sep 2015 6:31pm
24th Sep 2015 7:05pm
24th Sep 2015 7:29pm
Not so tender is the night here, but I imagine F. Scott would appreciate "Romance" anyway.
"Seeks redempt (should be redemption?)
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust"
Can't have this prick pressuring you. "Redemption" is a pretty tall order even for a virgin slut.
"Your sweet song
My darlin
Already
Been sung."
That's a gracious goodbye. No bitterness on your part, and hopefully no hard feelings on his. Just let him go hang out with Gatsby and have a few drinks to put things in perspective. Really enjoyed this Jennifer!
"Seeks redempt (should be redemption?)
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust"
Can't have this prick pressuring you. "Redemption" is a pretty tall order even for a virgin slut.
"Your sweet song
My darlin
Already
Been sung."
That's a gracious goodbye. No bitterness on your part, and hopefully no hard feelings on his. Just let him go hang out with Gatsby and have a few drinks to put things in perspective. Really enjoyed this Jennifer!
24th Sep 2015 9:02pm
And she really wasnt being gracious with that goodbye, think of the playboy, starlet, artists worst fear.. ...
Its been done before.
Its been done before.
Well yes Crow, you know of past and future pleasures.. .looking...
Often miss the pleasure itsselve.
If dreams came true, i would seduce Gatsby, spend rag time days in flapper fringed dresses painting Clara Bow kisses on mouth, listen to whine and slide of sax n trumpet, bottle of bathtub gin in my garter
Dive into the pool and ignore the bullet ridden body floatin past.
But hell! Or at least limbo, All is lost to fuckery.
Same moral as always.
Fuck it. Where is my hundai n japanese steak house on really adventurous nights?
💋Jennifer
Often miss the pleasure itsselve.
If dreams came true, i would seduce Gatsby, spend rag time days in flapper fringed dresses painting Clara Bow kisses on mouth, listen to whine and slide of sax n trumpet, bottle of bathtub gin in my garter
Dive into the pool and ignore the bullet ridden body floatin past.
But hell! Or at least limbo, All is lost to fuckery.
Same moral as always.
Fuck it. Where is my hundai n japanese steak house on really adventurous nights?
💋Jennifer
24th Sep 2015 10:49pm
24th Sep 2015 11:26pm
25th Sep 2015 2:01am
"Sweet wet baptism between my thighs"
Your brush was flawless in that stroke. Live the title as well. Excellent calamity.
Your brush was flawless in that stroke. Live the title as well. Excellent calamity.
25th Sep 2015 7:23am
25th Sep 2015 3:44am
"Suck nourish
From my beauty
Live through vice
And distinction " Oooh, I love that line! Actually, there are several lines I adore in this ink.
....and the image to match this poem is lovely.
This is truly a sensual and romantic piece.
25th Sep 2015 7:24am
Thank you very much sweetie, especially from a writer as talented as you.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
27th Sep 2015 12:01pm
27th Sep 2015 12:55pm
7th Oct 2015 5:20am
Jennifer,
"Sweet wet baptism
In my thighs
Before i die a rage spent
Anger and lust"
This kind of Baptism in total oneness with woman is the ultimate ecstasy for a man. More so than any a priest can do a woman can redeem a man with the transforming power of her sexuality. Woman is the alpha and the omega for man..
Seeks redemption
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust
Woman is man's salvation. Through the feminine in nature and woman man is saved. God your poem takes me into the spirituality of sex and its power to heal. This is 100 proof poetry. Fanfuckingtastic.
deep and abiding love,
John
"Sweet wet baptism
In my thighs
Before i die a rage spent
Anger and lust"
This kind of Baptism in total oneness with woman is the ultimate ecstasy for a man. More so than any a priest can do a woman can redeem a man with the transforming power of her sexuality. Woman is the alpha and the omega for man..
Seeks redemption
Between my legs
A virgin spirit
A sluts thrust
Woman is man's salvation. Through the feminine in nature and woman man is saved. God your poem takes me into the spirituality of sex and its power to heal. This is 100 proof poetry. Fanfuckingtastic.
deep and abiding love,
John
7th Oct 2015 5:36am
Thank you so much. I considered salvation in that verse, both words are parallel. But the alternative meaning in redemption sealed it for me, to seek possession of, liked the layers in meaning.
The line stretch arms further to catch a past too far flung, no one seemed to
See that It was a reference to an F Scott quote, one of my favs
No matter tomorrow we run faster stretch out our arms farther. . . And then one fine morning—
So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.
Of course the meaning isn't there in full, and altered to fit the piece.
Love you sweet cheeks
Jennifer
The line stretch arms further to catch a past too far flung, no one seemed to
See that It was a reference to an F Scott quote, one of my favs
No matter tomorrow we run faster stretch out our arms farther. . . And then one fine morning—
So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.
Of course the meaning isn't there in full, and altered to fit the piece.
Love you sweet cheeks
Jennifer
