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ONION
And my boots scuff at the heel
But I don't feel the chaff as I march
And my shirts fray at the cuff
Hurting rough beneath the starch
And this wart I grew in anger
And this ulcer out of hate
Like loving in Virginia
I need out of this state.
So I cook slow thyme and sage
And rub ginger with my finger
Making something out of nothing
That I found inside my fridge
And the onion catch my eyes
My heart's the rhythm of the knife
And the sun upon the porch shouts
Thank God I'm Alive
For I need nothing more than
The rest of my life
But I don't feel the chaff as I march
And my shirts fray at the cuff
Hurting rough beneath the starch
And this wart I grew in anger
And this ulcer out of hate
Like loving in Virginia
I need out of this state.
So I cook slow thyme and sage
And rub ginger with my finger
Making something out of nothing
That I found inside my fridge
And the onion catch my eyes
My heart's the rhythm of the knife
And the sun upon the porch shouts
Thank God I'm Alive
For I need nothing more than
The rest of my life
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Re. ONION
22nd Sep 2015 10:44pm
is the onion mixture a cure-all..?
I mean I've got this blister on my heel..:)
I really like the images you put
in my head...
I mean I've got this blister on my heel..:)
I really like the images you put
in my head...
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Re. ONION
22nd Sep 2015 11:56pm
This is quite pleasing to the both the inner eye and ear. Its momentary, but has depth. Excellent work Whale.
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23rd Sep 2015 6:19am
Re. ONION
23rd Sep 2015 00:52am
this piece made think, that as there are the many layers to the onion.....so are there many facets to our lives.....
and if this speaks of your life, mo Chara, then you seem to be one who lives by simple desires....simple needs....and simple satisfactions!
These qualities (facets) are soo truly admirable.....Perhaps, even envied, by some.
I am inspired by your ink--indeed!
and if this speaks of your life, mo Chara, then you seem to be one who lives by simple desires....simple needs....and simple satisfactions!
These qualities (facets) are soo truly admirable.....Perhaps, even envied, by some.
I am inspired by your ink--indeed!
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23rd Sep 2015 9:09am
I envy the state as well dear enchantress - we seek it here we seek it there then it suddenly comes upon us... Then as suddenly disappears :)
Re. ONION
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 2:59am
You've traveled the road less traveled and came home to find that the treasure was right in your backyard.

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Re. ONION
23rd Sep 2015 4:34am
Re. ONION
24th Sep 2015 10:30am
I love the layers of this ... It's like a sweet onion ... cebolla roja!
I enjoyed the subtleties of the day and how you transitioned into something larger
Bravo!
I enjoyed the subtleties of the day and how you transitioned into something larger
Bravo!
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25th Sep 2015 6:01am
Re. ONION
24th Sep 2015 9:54pm
Being content with now, and with what one has in the moment enables immense blessings through gratitude.
Beautiful imagery. Especially the sun on the porch, and the making something from nothing.
Beautiful imagery. Especially the sun on the porch, and the making something from nothing.
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25th Sep 2015 6:03am
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8th Oct 2015 11:20pm
Its the little things that find us when we're at our lowest, it seems- to remind us, if nothing else, of the simplest of joys we find in this world, such as you've described in the act of cooking. Its amazing, isn't it? Creating something out of nothing. You never know you'll have enough to make something until you step out and try.
This is a wonderful piece. Thanks for sharing!
This is a wonderful piece. Thanks for sharing!
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10th Oct 2015 9:40pm
Re. ONION
11th Oct 2015 5:02pm
Someone once told me "life is just how you look at it". This made me think of that. Focus on the positives, and your life will be positive too. Enjoyable read.
Michael
Michael
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11th Oct 2015 5:30pm