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mother's shriek
Look at the deadman's noose
The one my head is through
Hanging there all limp
Only you could have stopped this successful attempt
You took my heart like a thief
And broke it in pieces
Fuck you!! Written in my blood
on the wall, you are why i have cut
A mother's shriek, heard arould the world
She wonders why I died for a girl
She is found
kneeling on the ground
She wheeps and wheeps
While I eternally sleep
She finds my phone showing your text
" I found someone else, i hate you. YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!"
The one my head is through
Hanging there all limp
Only you could have stopped this successful attempt
You took my heart like a thief
And broke it in pieces
Fuck you!! Written in my blood
on the wall, you are why i have cut
A mother's shriek, heard arould the world
She wonders why I died for a girl
She is found
kneeling on the ground
She wheeps and wheeps
While I eternally sleep
She finds my phone showing your text
" I found someone else, i hate you. YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!"
Published 11th Jun 2011
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11th Jun 2011 12:48pm
11th Jun 2011 2:57pm
Thank you, I decided to put the mom in this because it brought more emotion to it, and it is something no one else, that I have seen anyway, has done
15th Jun 2011 1:56am
I don't know whether to like this or hate it. It has fallen so close to me. The 17 year old son of a very dear friend of mine took his life a year ago after his girlfriend sent him a text message............that mother's shriek can still be heard......
15th Jun 2011 2:59am
Im sorry, i wanted to write the emotion of the mother in here because no one has done it before
