A Tender Adieu

thank you beautiful one for showing me love on this write :)

I love you Brenda

I'm stunned ur leavin me like this but oh well then...  Lol oh, wasn't me!? My bad lol... Seriously, I echo Taryn's thoughts here :)

you always make me giggle thank you Poe for leaving your thoughts :)

with love Crim

pain drips from your poisoned quill with each word.  Excellent write, dearest Crim.

thank you Lord Hades I cherish your thoughts and visits..

with love Crim

Brenda, can feel the emotion in this.. brilliantly done as always.. excellent ink.. with love...


Dave

thank you graciously Dave :)

with love Brenda

I love how your words flow together, really, so far which has only been two poems I've read of yours, they've ben beautiful. :)

thank you most kindly :)

with love Crim

Letting it go is the most selfless love.
An excellent write Brenda, with great flow and well measured words.

thank you Rina for words spoke in wisdom :)

with love Brenda

You have a generous heart Crim.  I gather that you were hurt but have at least partially recovered.  In any case you're saying goodbye without bitterness, going the route of forgiveness rather than rage.  
 
"intellectual demon
found no fascination with my intellect"

I can't help but think the guy's probably stuck on himself if he didn't find you fascinating.  Arrogance be damned.  Fine work as always Crim!

thank you Sir Crow I don't really know if I ever really fascinated or not just my take..

love your insight..

with love Crim

Cool drop Crim

Discarded flower at cafe exit

thank you kindly Whale for a poetic comment :)

with love Crim

I really enjoyed this write.
Reflecting on past feeling;
The wants and "want nots"
of feelings and emotions
that seem to contradict,
The willingness to forgive
and move on> lesson well
noted. Thank for sharing
Ms Brenda

Keith

thank you Keith for giving me a new perspective on this write and for leaving your thoughts..

with love Brenda

Great job on this I wish I could say the same thing to one person

thank you kindly Sir if you can't say it to them maybe write about it :)

with love Crim

that's a graceful note of parting, Crim. sweet poetry...

thank you kindly John :)

with love Crim

"holding them in my hands  
dusty with cob webs"  
~feel your depths here, m'beauty.. damn this one hurts too.. *nuzzles n kisses

"letting these feelings go  
on a gentle breeze"  
~the telling moment.. which you release in gorgeous goodbye..
healing balm whispered to your page ;)

your bare is full and bursting in ache.. Much luvins Brenda,
~d

thank you lovely d~ for the lovins and kisses beautiful lady.. sending love back your way :)   love Brenda

a beautifully poetic goodbye with a hint of "just fuck off" about it :-)

excellent writing as always :-)

thank you David for showing love on this ink :)

with love Crim

flows like a calm stream on an autumn morning... it takes great power to move on from the people we're in love or addicted to... "with hopes you prosper in all you endeavor"... was the kicker

thank you Dean for your keen insight it was more of an addiction.. also grateful for you beautiful thoughts on this write :)

with love Crim

Such a gentle release. Evocative still. Beautiful ink, Dear, Crim. - blue angel

thank you lovely Angel :)

with love Crim

 Tender indeed, lovely lass.
 This being further proof of your multifaceted talents.

 Has anyone told you lately, you are very much admired?
 If not, consider yourself told.

you know,
C.

thank you Vegas you touched my heart with your comment..

you are admired yourself :)

with love Brenda

A beautifully written poem crimsin

thank you kindly DP..

with love Crim