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I love your hair when it’s short & red
I pull it gently when it’s long & black
when it’s Harlow blonde, you devour me
I know you in all your brilliant colors
in lace & silk, in cashmere & coarse denim
a mist of cologne, upon freshly-bathed skin
in the softest blue moonlight
your fragrance tickles and teases my olfactory channels
dusty roses, dandelion smoke
rain forest votive candles, and peaches in season
your vocal vibrations are whispers of the wind
the trill of the robin; velvety sighs elicited
by my direst kisses
as you conspire in a charade of romance
sing of an auric love
or leave a hymn of farewell
(there’s always ‘farewell’)
beyond the rendezvous
you are there throughout the sky
and in each billowing cloud
trembling between drops of rain
in the steamy mirror
and ever seductive, in the tangled sheets
slayer of my loneliness, your face is always beautiful
and you have many names
Published 11th Sep 2015
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11th Sep 2015 7:27pm
So decadently beautiful John I'm in love with the woman or women you describe here..
with love Crim
with love Crim
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11th Sep 2015 9:01pm
Dusky kisses upon the wind stroked sands. Seductive dreams find their place within your poetry. Love it. - blue angel
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11th Sep 2015 9:45pm
a lovely write, like an ode to your evolving goddess.
thanks for the read, JF
thanks for the read, JF
12th Sep 2015 3:55am
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12th Sep 2015 6:04am
'I love your hair when it’s short & red
I pull it gently when it’s long & black'
Then you'll love my hair;). . .xoxo, Devlin/Doll
I pull it gently when it’s long & black'
Then you'll love my hair;). . .xoxo, Devlin/Doll
12th Sep 2015 7:55am
That's some impressive work JohnFeddeler. A very entertaining, interesting and inspiring read. Thanks for writing it.
12th Sep 2015 11:05am
Very Enchanting Ink John,filled with lofty allure and vivid imagery
fav lines:
"you are there throughout the sky
and in each billowing cloud
trembling between drops of rain "
fav lines:
"you are there throughout the sky
and in each billowing cloud
trembling between drops of rain "
12th Sep 2015 2:51pm
femininity in all it's glorious shades & textures...
... you sure know your way around a woman, mister feddeler
xoxox
... you sure know your way around a woman, mister feddeler
xoxox
12th Sep 2015 9:13pm
"And you have many names." She could be a composite, an ideal woman. I'm still working on mine....
13th Sep 2015 5:17am
....your work has always made me sigh,....
So damn beautiful! Missed reading you, John. Xo
So damn beautiful! Missed reading you, John. Xo
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